This is a cool write Altair.........Once you have been exposed to this and are mesmerised by it .......it will never leave you no matter how far from the sea you are ........Regards Nu
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoOct 15, 2014
Lovely poem. I could picture each thought succinctly as you transport me there. Nicely done and welcome to the corner.
This is a nice piece of work. I love the ocean. It took me back to Laguna Beech in California. Where I left my window open for the same reasons I know the sea has a hearty side and can be trecheous But what you expressed here about the realities of the sea and how it is forgotten under these circumstances. I believe The Sea is the sign of Gemini split personality. Thank you for taking me back.
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Thank you for taking me back.