The Ocean

My young ears hear the sound in the night
It is my first night
The rhythmic rush and pound
and the quiet churn surrounds me

The window, cracked open slightly
brings in the cold fume of the salty air
Each breath is soothing
and I fall asleep

No dreams
No worries
No cares
No pain

The sound carries me
as if I was afloat upon it
each swell denies the harsh realities
My body dips and peaks with the tide

I wake to the sun
the sound is still there
rhythmic pounds and churns
I only need to be quiet to listen at any time
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Posted: Oct 2014

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Nuwahri61
This is a cool write Altair.........Once you have been exposed to this and are mesmerised by it .......it will never leave you no matter how far from the sea you are ........Regards Nucheers
Poetnumber1
Lovely poem. I could picture each thought succinctly as you transport me there. Nicely done and welcome to the corner.
ladygwen123
This is a nice piece of work. I love the ocean. It took me back to Laguna Beech in California. Where I left my window open for the same reasons I know the sea has a hearty side and can be trecheous But what you expressed here about the realities of the sea and how it is forgotten under these circumstances. I believe The Sea is the sign of Gemini split personality.
Thank you for taking me back.
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