a silver creeping mist falling a cloud capping the mountain like a great waterfall flowing in a faraway distance i began dreaming gold inside the vision silver fingers pointing out spears slowly crumbling forward embracing one pure relic treasure memory of love one warm sweet glowing jewel in deep happiness inside shining diamond joy beaming your sunshine baby a star lighting one gem brightly dazzles a pearl
i drew with a 6/stepping up waves to 9 syllable count then we reach cloud 9/9/9 10 is the perfect ending 10 out of 10 a mad way i am trying to draw a jewel
Comments (12)
Ken
beauty of it's essence into a pure and shinning whole. Nice work bro.
Cafe