Love on the rocks

You baby are the first and last warm thought
on my mind, each and every single day
I want to lie beside you, nuzzle up
real close falling asleep listening
to your gentle heartbeats drum, slowly strum
Rolling doors open, to a princess gem
rare clear cut, one of the finest beauties
Sweet crowning regal, in the heart blossoms
flowering feelings explode, they now start
shining much brighter, in your petals touch


My sunshine satin warm fingers touching
emotions confetti sprinkle ruby
inside fires up, in light of every single one
Silent whispering living echo in a breeze
floating on wings of love, you're the heart and soul gem
Thinking deeply treasure of the deepest ocean
you rock the waves rising then crashing at your feet
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Nov 2014
About this poem:
10 syllable by 10 syllable one in a hundred
then 10 syllable rising to twelve midnight dreams

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Comments (14)

bard76
Just Beautiful.....your such a romantic Liam...David...
candykid
Nice count once again Liam. I'm imagining those rare clear- cut diamonds as ice cubes in the glass of love on the rocks.cheers
darkhorse555
dave dear pal thank you kindly for the wonderful comment bless youangel grin
Abby1963
WOW! BEAUTIFUL ! STUNNING ! LOVELY I can't find enough words to tell you just how beautiful your poem is !!!hug gift gift
soulgoddess
flirty dance
Very inspiring new style you are using here
Looks very refreshing indeed
heart beating
darkhorse555
smiling candy your sweet talking the petals melting in the dew of a rose you got style palangel grin thumbs up thumbs up
beautifulyou
'Silent whispering living echo in a breeze'

i like that dark flower
darkhorse555
abby thank you kindly for the dazzling very beautiful comment deeply appreciated dear friend angel grin
darkhorse555
angeline do you like the style i used in this one trying out different ones that come into my head you know me smiling cloud nine is really sailing away wonderful comment bless wine angel wine grin
darkhorse555
aah beautiful thank you that was my favourite words also when i wrote it i though yes loved it myself wonderful comment dear friendangel grin
Poetnumber1
Loved this Liam. Its good that you challenged yourself with this structured form. Nice job bud.
soulgoddess
Liam, I love your new style here heart beating flirty
It's free flowing and I can wrap my heart around this one hug

Love & Light to you kiss
darkhorse555
mm thank you pal always up for different structures smiling wonderful comment deeply appreciated angel grin
Bajanshay
Just lovely Liam! Lovely!bouquet
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