Black Sunrise

It's a black and twisted sun today,
Super cold, subzero rays,
Hurt me in a thousand ways,
Like microscopic stabbing pains,
From razor sharp electric blades,
Feeling like I'm froze in place,
My entire body becoming solid,
One leg breaks from walking on it,
Shattered to a million shards,
And as I fall I break an arm,
The frozen blood then reached my heart,
It tried to pump and fell apart,
My spine just simply snaps in half,
As every bone my body has,
buckles creaks and fissure cracks,
And pieces fly like broken glass,
Too many to add with fractal math,
On this day I watched my demise,
The picture framed inside my mind,
Staring blankly dead inside,
Ice crystal eyes see the black sun rise...
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jan 2015
About this poem:
When even the heat of the sun cannot warm my cold heart...

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Abby1963
Beautifully written . heartfelt I can relate too
darkhorse555
deep excellent pen old pal smiling very beautifully painted piece love the imaginary used angel grin
madtat29
Ty Abby ...was hoping I was done with these writes but they keep coming out...dunno
madtat29
Appreciate Ya Dark Horse...thanks for stopping by bud
beautifulyou
when the heart falls apart giving it silent Presence can bring us more deeply into knowing what it needs in order to more authentically Live Its path as Love.

thank you for sharing a part of your heart with us mad rose
trurorob
Cold well written write Tony
Rob
Nuwahri61
Hey Mad........Good to read from you again .......This is brilliant , really enjoyed it ..........Regards Nucool
madtat29
Ty beautiful..I appreciate the kind words...
madtat29
Cool Rob...right oncheers
madtat29
That.is My..glad to see ya cheers
Poetnumber1
Nice to read from you Tony. Excellent read. Salutations cheers
madtat29
Sup Nu thanks for coming thru !cheers
madtat29
Thanks M old buddy..hope your doing well handshake
bard76
Brutal, very graphic....I loved it, showing your pain as external....great poem.....awesome....David.....
madtat29
Thanks David..appreciate ya brodrinking
SnowCoveredMuse
Mad,

First of all, ]
very well written!

Secondly. get out of my head,
that describes my very being today!

How did you know/ do that? conversing

Thanks for sharing!

SAS

troll detective detective
madtat29
Hi SAS Ty Ty glad you can relate...hope you feel better now
bungallow55
Interesting way to describe wintercheers
Titania48
Awesomely dark Tony, love it.
Willow3939
I am loving your poetry. Very stark and visceral. bouquet
Tannyah
That's deep!
madtat29
Hiya Titania thought your like this one wine
madtat29
Thank you muchly Willow...we seem to be mutual fans...see you around handshake wine
madtat29
Hiya Tannyah glad you liked it ?? Ty ty
Bludylasky
Oh how chillingly painful.. you paint these words beautifully with emotion. .
fjamesj9701
I must say you have evolved , this is the toughest most roughest piece of writing Ive read from you my West Coast Brother. Cheers my friend… Jessecheers
madtat29
Ty Blud..preciate that greatly...handshake
madtat29
Jesse mi amigo...ty for the compliment...i would hope we all are evolving...a fan as always...Tony
beer
Coraleigh
I recommend a Zimmer frame Tony.
nonsmoker
Breaking Dawn Eh !

Never put you down for a twilight fan laugh cheers .

Just kidding of course.
Feeling the pain bro, Dark and dreary, The way it should be done cool thumbs up
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