The Time Say Goodbye Is Hardest

The idea of forever is kind of ridiculous, which is unfortunate because it's kind of a nice thing to say, you know. I think it softens the blow of mortality and having to say goodbye to everything you know and everyone you love and all that kind of thing. Quote - Conor Oberst



The time to say goodbye is hardest
When countless strength expires
And hours fades into nothingness
You're left in a womb of pain
At the realm of hope's decrease.
The shadows loom above the ceiling
The sun wafts in its last light
The hands of death parades the room
From the vacant isles pulsed with silence
The sirens echoes from the distant
The death bells like a heron sounds
This unimaginable pain leaves me breathless
The windows quivers, iced up with dew
Slow - breath replays , in constant days of dread
I've longed for peace in the darkness
Thro' pain's increase, memories recite
The dead yesterdays of joys sweet.

The time to say goodbye is hardest
I long to smell the ever green grass again
And to hear the language of the seas
Once more in the mezmerizing moment, of the
Ever changeless sun on the realm of heaven
To breathe the free mist of the mystic flowers
To run with the winds, and to feel its warm pulse
In all the earth aglowed with spring
This feeling overwhelms me
To hear my father's voice again, across
The deep quietude of the ever dreamy river.

The time to say goodbye is hardest
The battling days are long
The nights grow cold and weary
Nothing matters but this one necessity
To breathe free again
Oh to breathe free again
The sweet air undisturbed
To be liberated from this long drawn pain
This flourishing sickness unabated
That has graced me for so long.

The time to say goodbye is hardest
The colour of the room is soft
Soft as the song bird's sweet cheer
Perhaps my thoughts draws me back
To the voice of violins and entralling
Blisses 'neath moon's silk hush to breath's delight
To think that I'd favor here than home
Death than the splendor of life
Is but a sordid insanity.
A freshly home cooked meal
Times spent with friends and family
The joyful laughters
The hugs , the endless kisses
Its sobriety enskies
this languid heart of mines.

The time to say goodbye is hardest
My eyes are wet with fresh remorse
The drips are coursing thro' my veins
The injection leaves me weary
I'm a soldier in this war
How often have I died
How often have I clung
To a strand of breath and hope
But as I look back
On the splendor of all my life
My heart would spring
A ceaseless smile
Thro' the valleys of my pain
Whilst my fervent prayers ascend
To a distant sky, relinquished
Of its glow, then so suddenly
I'm at peace in life's carousel.

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Posted: Feb 2015
About this poem:
A near death experience hospitalised has inspired this poem. A pretty tough way to start the year uh. Ive met up with some incredible persons in there who was kind enough to share their experiences with me. One of them unfortunately passed away. The point is when you think that your problems in life is terrible theres always someone out there to top yours. So cherish and appreciate your blessings as small as they may be and live life to the full because one day you may never get that second chance.
Thanks for perusing my poem.

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peachmelba
Did you write that poem,??


cheers
Poetnumber1
Yes I did. I prefer putting my intials on my poems. M.M it is or just M for short. I appreciate you taking the time to read. Thank you very much. Cheers back at you. cheers
peachmelba
Hey poet I thought your poem was beautiful and very emotional.

I didnt read the footnote till just now,

When I just read your poem I thought wow ,

Did you really write that.

I only spoke with you some months ago and am a little shocked at reading the footnote now to learn what you you experienced,

At deaths door,but came through it,

teddybear
peachmelba
Your poem brought me back to when I visited my dear young cousin in a hospice dying at the age of 23 with cancer,

A beautiful young man in body and mind who played guitar loved his mother his girlfriend ,

Once full of life and hopes and dreams but I spoke to him like he had today he was breathing,

Wasn't meant to be that we would have this beautiful person for long,

His eyes lit up a room and his manner was gentle ,kind,.



Poet thankyou for your poem on here and I'm so relieved to hear you are okay you have there and back your life I'd say has changed so much more now that other people that haven't had your experience would understand but your poem gives insight to what you have been through,

Your a remarkably talented young man ,bless you.

You indeed are.

hug
peachmelba
Meant to have typed Gary my young cousin loved his mother and his girlfriend and was a joy to all who had the pleasure to have met him,

That's the type person he was,....he suffeered the anguish but he is in heaven in spirit and I'm not sad now when I think of him because I know he is the brightest star there ever was.


teddybear
Abby1963
Awesome write it's sad but true we should all count our blessings no matter how big or small they are for it could very easily be me .great read hug
soulgoddess
daydream rose heart wings kiss hug

A very B E A U T I F U L masterpiece, dearest friend Mustapha.
Every experience we will have or had in the past were electric sparks igniting our inner fiery dragons which were holding the ancient scripts embedded with all the wisdom in our old & new souls.

'Forever' is not a thing our humanly forms could understand but I feel that the wisdom in our old souls are forever existing within us and will continue to exist hereafter...
......that is how I imagined it would be......
candykid
A natural-born poet and artist. Anyone that can infuse such depressing emotions with such beautiful word choice and depth is nothing short of natural-born.....it's great to see you still here M.M......cheers
Poetnumber1
Yes its quite the emotional piece Peach. Im so glad you could relate to this when hardly anyone else would and what a touching experience ! I guess not all of us get second chances. Im so sorry to hear about that. Such a wonderful comment though. grin Appreciate that from the bottom of my heart.m I sent you a private message. Thank you again for caring. hug teddybear
Poetnumber1
Thank you Abby for your wonderful comment and for reading and relating. Count the small blessings and live life to the fullest because not always that you get second chances. hug back at yuh
Poetnumber1
Thank you my dear friend Angeline. Its quite a deep sadness to delete all those truly beautiful comments that you have placed on my poems over the years. I will be leaving the site in a week or so.crying crying

As such my profile i will be deleting as soon as my poems have been off the site. Thank you Angeline from the bottom of my heart. A private mail will be sent to you. Thanks again my dear. hug
Poetnumber1
Hi Christian,thank you my friend. As you know, I have decided to end my writing muse a few months ago but with my experience in January Ive decided to come back to share three poems here... even this one which bares my heart and soul in it. I will be leaving the site soon. Thank you for all your support and wonderful comments always my friend. You know I'll keep in touch so dont pelt the beer bottle. laugh
SnowCoveredMuse
Poet...

Your talent
and raw emotions
are inspiring
to this tired poet!


Glad to see you back
Stick around a spell please?


SAShug
soulgoddess
teddybear Thanks for the notice, dearest friend ;)
I believe good memories are forever and will stay as carvings on our hearts.... the deletion of what you have written here is only the surface of what really exist inside... what lies beneath the surfaces are for eternity within you
daydream
SilverWaters
Dear Poet,
I read and remain brethless. Like so many things in your poem...but still is under impression of it and words are not enough now...You are great Poet! I wish to have time to try translating you in my language. Thank you!
123whisper
Oh your one of my 'oldest' friend on this site,proud to know you as one of the most talented poets and great friend.
Don't leave me now frustrated
Beautiful poem
bouquet
avias
My Friend MM...You are someone who can put down words that grasp such emotion and feeling...can really bring reality to the page and with it, show how wonderful it is to be here in this world! Thank you always for sharing your talents with us...Big hugs and wishes for continued blessings with your health....
Forever friends,Harrietthug bouquet
Poetnumber1
Sas a tired poet. Over my dead body. laugh Your poetry is first class, and what is more you not only inspire me but inspire all those who take writing poetry seriously. A private mail would be sent to you. Always hug
Poetnumber1
So true Angeline. teddybear
Titania48
After reading this awesome poem i would like to say how happy i am to see one of my favourite poets still here. You are the shining star of this cornermm.
bard76
Pretentious dribble...loved it.David...
Poetnumber1
Bard whats wrong with you man. laugh Are you in the stage of menapause, I totally understand why you might be acting this way or did you fall off tree and hit the left side of your brain which controls common sense. Control your hormones man . laugh
I did you nothing wrong except write a poem about my experience. doh Unbelievable moping doh
Nuwahri61
Hi Poet..........superbly written....... Unfortunately you had to experience it for the reality of this poem to come to fruition but the essence is amazing ..........Regards Nucomfort
bard76
I apologize.....not attacking your poems, it's your plain arrogance..top dog...I write coz I enjoy it, you write for your ego....poor perfect man...lots of love David....xxx
Poetnumber1
Im sorry you feel that way Bard....I honestly do. rolling on the floor laughing You dont know a thing about my personality except for those who have been very close to me on this site. Your assessment is based on a silly pen name i chose six years ago when i signed up here.
Im sorry for your vexation because you hate my personality but you know what, i will still drink a beer with you if I visit your country. Take care of yourself.
bard76
I always buy the first round.....after every fight..win or lose...bloody faces at the bar.....I'm sure I will be picking you up from the floor.. manners mean a lot......share a pint or two.......stop calling me bard, you know my name.....David.....
Poetnumber1
Im calling you Bard just to irritate the hell out of you to start a fight. laugh Cheers David. cheers
Poetnumber1
Thank you SilverWaters. A complete stranger I am to you and yet you leave a kind remark like that on my experience. Thank you. hug
Poetnumber1
All that banging on the wall might leave you brain dead Thea...lol. We will always keep in touch. Friends always. hug
Poetnumber1
Marikia thank you for relating to my experience. Your wonderful comment is much appreciated. Smiles grin
bard76
Hah.. shut up! I'm beginning to like you..DAVID..
Poetnumber1
Harriet thank you for the encouragement while I was at the hospital. I appreciate that from the bottom of my heart.crying
And thank you for the wonderful comment. We'll keep in touch as always my friend.hug
Poetnumber1
Thank you Nu for your wonderful comment mate. Lifes troubles inspire change. Smiles grin give Kathy my regards teddybear
Poetnumber1
Omg...sorry Nu the kisses are not meant for you mate...Dont take it the wrong way....Im super straight. laugh
Poetnumber1
Arent we supposed to be in a fight...lol. All the best to you and Abby David.
Next time i would punch you in the face for being rude to me.
rolling on the floor laughing

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