Immortalized

by Bluejay5Rancho Cordova, California, USA

Oct 2015 753 Views 3 comments

Immortalized

Standing at the top of a waterfall,
I swan-dive off the edge
with no fear of death.
So long as you hold my heart,
I need not fear a thing,
for I will never truly die.

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Posted: Oct 2015

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trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainOct 30, 2015

You have a nice way with words, but I would advise you read the rules of the site, especially with regard to "Flooding" the page and not giving other poets their fair time.
Rob

Bluejay5OPRancho Cordova, California USAOct 30, 2015

Oh, sorry. I didn't realize there was a feed. I'll try to space them out from now on.

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainOct 30, 2015

Easily done, no problem, the rules are on the left at the bottom, rule 3 is the flooding one, just gives others a fair chance to be read before disappearing into the abyss.
Rob

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