Haiku-4

In a cold house
often filled with sadness
empty bottle
phone rings
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Dec 2015

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shadow1950
not a haiku no capitals are ever used and the syllable count is wrong should be 5/7/5 and only 3 lines also a haiku is only about nature. Try again hugs
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by lostabone (30 Poems)
on Dec 2015
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