Truth of A Liar

by DavinadiaJakarta, Indonesia

Apr 2010 1,552 Views 31 comments

The Truth of A Liar

You come as a shadow
A silhouette of a perfect man
A bunch of dreams in your hand
You paint the rainbow at horizon
A heaven’s view on this earth
When it comes to the juncture
The rain and thunder ease the shadow
No more silhouette or dreams
There is nothing left behind
But the truth you tell the world only one
That you are truly a man

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Posted: Apr 2010

About this poem:

where is the lonely word of honesty ?

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Comments (31)

hedistuffLayopolis, West Virginia USAApr 3, 2010

where is the lonely word of honesty............?

InayahJakarta, IndonesiaApr 3, 2010

Man oh man...

hedistuffLayopolis, West Virginia USAApr 3, 2010

I was taken by the novel phrase...where is the lonely word of honesty?...I dug it..so I repeated it...not questioning anything.

john0217okc, Oklahoma USAApr 4, 2010

very good job i like it

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainApr 4, 2010

nice poem!
rob

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USAApr 4, 2010

Hi, Davinadia,
Very nice first poem. I like the contradiction in the title's Truth of A Liar. The silhouette of a perfect man evokes images of form without substance. Thank you for sharing.

boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario CanadaApr 4, 2010

Well not all men are liars, its
simply a bending of truths...lol.
Nicely written phrases. TY

jazzy75Houston, Texas USAApr 5, 2010

Davinadia - i like your poem...i hope you continue posting :)

DavinadiaOPJakarta, IndonesiaApr 7, 2010

I thank to you all for nice comment on my first poem ...

freeatlast64847Lanagan, Missouri USAApr 7, 2010

I echo the others. Please read my poem, The Dating Site Hustle. It takes a more whimsical tack. Yours is soulful & valid of how you feel, but mine may cheer you.

EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusApr 8, 2010

"A bunch of dreams in your hand", very nice, thanks for sharing... Whenever i go into a venture with new colleagues, they always urge me to 'bend' the truth, i tell them, then i may as well bend my honour...

DavinadiaOPJakarta, IndonesiaApr 9, 2010

Freeatlast,
The Dating Site Hustle, long distance love, money talks

thanks
Eargreytea,
To ‘bend’ the truth to bend our honour, it's true and nice, thank you

chiku_zhikujakarta, Jakarta IndonesiaApr 10, 2010

one day you will find someone honest ...

agoodguy2havesuffolk, Virginia USAApr 24, 2010

i agree w all but want to reiterate Jazzy...first write of MANY more!

justmejohnoklahoma city, Oklahoma USAApr 24, 2010

you are good my sweet heart keep writing more

justmejohnoklahoma city, Oklahoma USAMay 26, 2010

i really love your first poem i read when i can

DavinadiaOPJakarta, IndonesiaJun 22, 2010

this will be my best poem ever

stareyesunknown, Jakarta IndonesiaJul 2, 2010

Lovely poem Davina

I believe it was came out from your heart. The Truth of A Liar, no body knows, but we have our mind and our feeling as well of our judgement to see". Let the Liar around, they never find them self in true world and life. As they looking for their right that they might never found?...who knows.

I love the poem. Keep writing. Am just new, and i have time just now to see all from this site.

Cheers from Jakarta Dav...
Dee

Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida USAJul 2, 2010

Really excellent poem. I loved the strength of the sentences.

DavinadiaOPJakarta, IndonesiaJul 2, 2010

thank you happygolucky4u

johntheraven1oklahoma city, Oklahoma USAAug 4, 2010

the time is getting near for us to meet my sweetheart

danielbrownredruth, Cornwall, England UKAug 4, 2010

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Finding the truth can be difficult, For if a doctor writes something that’s not true on somebody’s notes,So anybody reading them would believe it, because he is a professional, and the lie can spread by the unawareness of people carrying it forward into years because people believe what they have read, So trust is very important for us all, If adults of today were teach our children to be more sincere I think the world would be a better place tomorrow,Have nice day everyone Daniel ---- IMAGE REMOVED because photobucket.com no longer allows embedded images ----

DavinadiaOPJakarta, IndonesiaAug 10, 2010

thank you everyone for the nice comment

johntheraven1oklahoma city, Oklahoma USAOct 1, 2010

your very first poem on this site

DavinadiaOPJakarta, IndonesiaOct 1, 2010

yes first time to make a poem here

hariksnaKerala:Cochin, Kerala IndiaOct 1, 2010

Welcome to poetry section davinadia...a bigbang....Thank you..niice write

DavinadiaOPJakarta, IndonesiaOct 1, 2010

Thanks hariksna

serpico12cardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKOct 2, 2010

welcome to the poetry section..that is a great start..well written poem...good work..

DavinadiaOPJakarta, IndonesiaOct 2, 2010

thank you serpico12

stillframeoklahoma city, Oklahoma USADec 4, 2010

i miss you my love

niah9Auckland, New ZealandDec 4, 2010

Oh Davinadia....I'm sure some of our males would insist they have also found some ladies that fit the description, but whatever, we have all found those who fit the description out there in the world, and most certainly here on CS, sad but true...clever write, more so for your first....Niah