A journey into Tomorrow.

I take a journey every now and then, a voyage
of discovery not known to many men, its a place
of tranquility where one can reflect, you can come
with me, you can take my hand, if you so elect,
I'll show you sights of beauty in peaceful contemplation,
the beginning of the world and the wonder of creation,
we'll trace a path across heavenly skies.. and see a new
world emerge as an old one dies,.... we'll watch comets
stream acrosse a black velvet night sky,
and watch shooting stars on their way to die,
So reside beside me if you can, you'll see another way,
you'll see another plan,..... I'll show you new perspective
and I'll show you new design,..... I'll share with you my
secret, we can change our paradigm,...... we'll create a new
beginning and dissolve whats past, a vision for the future
thats strong and made to last,... though nothing ever stays the
same, ...............yes change is constant, ......
................there's no one to blame,
events will happen in your life that forumlate the way
you think,..... stop and contemplate,...... for life is over
in a blink, its you that brings your world alive,
you have control........ to thrive........or strive.
nothing can effect you, there's nothing you can't do,
life cant hold you back,,unless you allow it to,
So come with me and take control, let this knowledge
be your guide, create your world, disown the past,
and take this heavenly ride, we'll find our way, through
the darkest day, and discover that new light, by
holding strong, and holding on, to what we know is right.
So don't let yesterday dictate to tommorrow, don't make
the past something to follow, now you take the reins,
you suffered the pains, believe in yourself, move from
the bad and move from the sad,,,you make it so,
you have control,, now you decide where you go.
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Posted: Apr 2010

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Ladybee42
cool, this would refer to anyone who's just emerged from the a forgettable experience, and now just needs to know that they are in charge again. hopefully those who need to will get to read it...handshake applause applause
FullofFun
"Now you decide where you go"..This is very true. A thought is an action in rehearsal, and we are the only ones who can control our own thoughts. So by choosing to think positive thoughts, it will lead to positive action. Changing our thought patterns can change our life's. Decide where you want to go, think positively about it and the result will be a positive action, and with these baby steps, you will achieve getting to where you want to go. Fantastically written poem, very profound. Not one person could read this poem without relating to it, and it touching them in some way. Keep up the good work xx
caroljoyce
I loved the gentle wisdom in this prose. It reminds me of my vision of the imminent new age. I liked its element of self responsibility 'there is no one to blame, you have control', the concept that the past has no real power and that you an create your own reality. It has almost an Eastern philosophy about it. This unique style seems to be your forte.
C.
agoodguy2have
C.J. said it's your forte...I tend to agree. the message is good, great even. what I really like is the cadence, the rhyming "design,..... I'll share with you my secret, we can change our paradigm,." and many more. As I've already said. he's back! great job optimisticme. you've just shown that even us "older" folks can make a good rap!
jazzy75
optimisticme - i like your 'journey into tomorrow'...it's wisdom shines bright :)peace
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