Forgetting

madtat29

by madtat29Farmington, New Mexico, USA

Apr 2010 642 Views 7 comments

Forgetting

Author: madtat29

Memories were made to fade over time,
Looking at your picture,
I cant get you off my mind,
The thoughts wont last,
They slowly fade,
With nothing new to take their place,
Unhappiness runs in streams down my face,
As I remember yesterdays...

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Posted: Apr 2010

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Comments (7)

Dementia

DementiaBelmont, Mississippi USAApr 19, 2010

Good poem madtat29. I've read 3 of your poems and like each one.

caroljoyce

caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKApr 19, 2010

Tender and poignant. I know the feel of rain on my face also. I can feel your pain and I love the way you write'Unhappiness runs in stream down my face'.Amazing imagery.

NeverEndingStory

NeverEndingStoryChesterfield, Derbyshire, England UKApr 19, 2010

Nicely written

dreamwolf5264

dreamwolf5264francestown, New Hampshire USAApr 19, 2010

are minds are syncronized....great material madtat.

agoodguy2have

agoodguy2havesuffolk, Virginia USAApr 20, 2010

everyone else already said, all i can add is put it to music.

Swan87

Swan87Syria, QatarApr 20, 2010

Nice one

jazzy75

jazzy75Houston, Texas USAApr 20, 2010

madtat29 - nice poem and images...thanks!

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