The Lonely Man

Perched upon a driftwood log
silently he sits
stares at the foaming waves
on this forgotton beach
a lonely man thinks of the past
a short lived smile upon his lips
as he remembers
his children on this same beach
playing games and running wild
all gone now and out of reach
he returns to his reverie and

a darker mood settles over him
all gone now
all gone he thinks
a tear rolls down his weathered cheek
for times long past.

he thinks
maybe death would welcome me
and set me free at last
no more thoughts of the past
or a lonely future
filled with dread
the black dog nipping at my feet
visits me at night in sleep

all gone now
all gone now he thinks
the pills he brought should do the trick
to end this hell on earth
and set him free at last
swallow the pills and be quick
too late to turn back now

perched upon a driftwood log
sleepily he sits
stares at the darkening waves
on this forgotton beach
the sun shines bright
in an azure sky
no clouds to darken anything

as he tumbles off the log
his sight fading and body weak
he lays on this forgotton beach
staring at the dark blue sky
and wonders why its come to this
a lonely way to die
he thinks

the tears run down his weathered face
now darkness gathers in this place
its time to die and say goodbye
to this lonely man
on this forgotton beach

now he rests in peace
on this lonely beach
a lonely man
the world forgot
lays upon this forelorn shore
a smile upon his frozen face
tells of his new resting place

rest in peace

Bruce Kilgour
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Posted: Nov 2017
About this poem:
this poem was written when i was a deep state of depression. I am sure people with depression can relate well with the word i say

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socrates44online today!
Bruce

Deeply touching piece of writing!
Someone mentioned to me that loneliness is part of the human condition.
Most, if not all of us have experienced some degree of loneliness.
The challenge is to transform loneliness into aloneness.
I wrote a piece on this:

Redex
This is yes a very deep peice of writing, i can relate to the beach and thinking of my past away life, but not in a depressed fashion hug i am sorry you felt so down thought. I can also remember lying on the beach and looking up and wondering about new doors opening kinda thing.

Very well written poem
godsprincessonline today!
So very very sad that anyone would feel that lonely and that desperate to leave this world. A lot of us on here are very lonely people looking to connect with someone who will love and cherish us. Years have gone by but you know what - if you hang around here long enough - you are no longer really lonely for you have developed a loving family poetry section! heart1 hug

Kathy wave
stormbruce
Thanks for your comments ladies and gents, it was in a period of my life when i was alone and still am 8 years later. Lonliness can become the norm and we accept it, but it is easy to become a hermit and cut ourselves off from the world. i still suffer chronic depression but have had it most of my life. Sometimes it can be still lonely surrounded by people
godsprincessonline today!
I know what you mean by cutting yourself off. I have found that I spend so much alone to myself that I am not comfortable attending social settings alone as most everyone is coupled off. To much time to think - thus comes out in my poems. Like my poem "I'm Invisible".

Kathy hug
completenutter
Ah I could relate, grief for the young children lost to adulthood.
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