Perched upon a driftwood log silently he sits stares at the foaming waves on this forgotton beach a lonely man thinks of the past a short lived smile upon his lips as he remembers his children on this same beach playing games and running wild all gone now and out of reach he returns to his reverie and
a darker mood settles over him all gone now all gone he thinks a tear rolls down his weathered cheek for times long past.
he thinks maybe death would welcome me and set me free at last no more thoughts of the past or a lonely future filled with dread the black dog nipping at my feet visits me at night in sleep
all gone now all gone now he thinks the pills he brought should do the trick to end this hell on earth and set him free at last swallow the pills and be quick too late to turn back now
perched upon a driftwood log sleepily he sits stares at the darkening waves on this forgotton beach the sun shines bright in an azure sky no clouds to darken anything
as he tumbles off the log his sight fading and body weak he lays on this forgotton beach staring at the dark blue sky and wonders why its come to this a lonely way to die he thinks
the tears run down his weathered face now darkness gathers in this place its time to die and say goodbye to this lonely man on this forgotton beach
now he rests in peace on this lonely beach a lonely man the world forgot lays upon this forelorn shore a smile upon his frozen face tells of his new resting place
rest in peace
Bruce Kilgour
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Posted: Nov 2017
About this poem:
this poem was written when i was a deep state of depression. I am sure people with depression can relate well with the word i say
socrates44San Fernando, Trinidad and TobagoNov 9, 2017
Bruce
Deeply touching piece of writing! Someone mentioned to me that loneliness is part of the human condition. Most, if not all of us have experienced some degree of loneliness. The challenge is to transform loneliness into aloneness. I wrote a piece on this:
This is yes a very deep peice of writing, i can relate to the beach and thinking of my past away life, but not in a depressed fashion i am sorry you felt so down thought. I can also remember lying on the beach and looking up and wondering about new doors opening kinda thing.
So very very sad that anyone would feel that lonely and that desperate to leave this world. A lot of us on here are very lonely people looking to connect with someone who will love and cherish us. Years have gone by but you know what - if you hang around here long enough - you are no longer really lonely for you have developed a loving family poetry section!
Kathy
stormbruceOPNumurkah, Victoria AustraliaNov 13, 2017
Thanks for your comments ladies and gents, it was in a period of my life when i was alone and still am 8 years later. Lonliness can become the norm and we accept it, but it is easy to become a hermit and cut ourselves off from the world. i still suffer chronic depression but have had it most of my life. Sometimes it can be still lonely surrounded by people
I know what you mean by cutting yourself off. I have found that I spend so much alone to myself that I am not comfortable attending social settings alone as most everyone is coupled off. To much time to think - thus comes out in my poems. Like my poem "I'm Invisible".
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Deeply touching piece of writing!
Someone mentioned to me that loneliness is part of the human condition.
Most, if not all of us have experienced some degree of loneliness.
The challenge is to transform loneliness into aloneness.
I wrote a piece on this:
Very well written poem
Kathy
Kathy