The Ruthless Hunter.

The star I saw in the sky - in gloomy winter
showed a new road to the life – to re-enter.
I only stopped my usual wander
star was hoard by the destiny – the ruthless hunter.

Not me – but my love is the sender
Through the rift in my heart – due to the fracture
sighs…! please float and reach to the cluster.
Make it visible – blinking in the center.
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Posted: Jan 2018
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The lost love..

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mcradloff
I have had some lost loves and I wish I were with them now.smitten
candleinthewind
Thank you mcradloff for your comment.
candleinthewind
Dear

First of all I should thank you for your comment.

But I would like to pleadingly request not to see the content of this poem with any religious point of view.

As I know, a long long time back under then prevailed circumstances, mankind used star to find their way or certain destination.

I only attempted to compare the eyes of a woman with the stars.. and with the assistance of such stars, a lover who dreaming about a new road to re enter to the life.

That's all.

Please go to any extreems.
candleinthewind
Please don't go to any extreems..!
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