Just as I ponder on my thoughts I feel uneasy to comprehend For life itself is a struggle People say only the fittest will survive Am I one of the fittest? Have I been the cause for someone or something to lose the chance To survive in this world To sustain myself?
Just thinking of it makes My bowels turn n churn Oh I feel so uneasy It's really difficult to comprehend As life means all things Great and small, birds and fish Fowls and bulls and goats Oh the list goes on and on.
Every living creature is created to live. Between humans and animals, we have developed a conscience sort of speak. Our thoughts mean we think of this and that. Many believe what this world has offered to them, in the path they create, their life their ways. I believe in my creator that has given me my existence and his plan to take it away when it comes. Be blessed my dear poet, every breath we take, every step we take is life. Live the now the best you can because tomorrow we don't know. SM
With life comes 3 Baggage's.. clear vision, a tender conscience and spiritual sensibility.. these are vital to a person.. The more grace men/women have in their hearts, the deeper is their sense of sin...the dead soul feels and sees nothing.. so my own personal conscience is SO strong that it is unfathomable how people can go around and live life with the knowledge of things they’ve done and people they hurt..
Based on what i've understood i wish to summarize your poem as follows- He who is not disciplined by his conscience, is disciplined by life when it evolves..
YGR33La habana, Greater La Havana CubaAug 19, 2022
To a mere existance it will be survival, But if 1 has a path and mission given by God or one may say having universal knowledge or a force that drives one, it may differ.
This talks of the latter. Thanks for the read and comment.
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Thank you so much for taking the time to write. You're really sweet.
Stay safe n blessed
Enjoyed the read
I enjoyed reading.
Based on what i've understood i wish to summarize your poem as follows- He who is not disciplined by his conscience, is disciplined by life when it evolves..
Thanks for the read and comment.
U might be a person who always strives to be a better person I'm sure.
Stay safe n blessed dear
Thank you for taking the time to read and write your thoughts my friend.
There's a bigger picture in this. It is related to universal knowledge and understanding and mission crusade of such an existance.
Thank you for u'r thoughts,
To a mere existance it will be survival,
But if 1 has a path and mission given by God or one may say having universal knowledge or a force that drives one, it may differ.
This talks of the latter.
Thanks for the read and comment.