Conscience

Just as I ponder on my thoughts
I feel uneasy to comprehend
For life itself is a struggle
People say only the fittest will survive
Am I one of the fittest?
Have I been the cause for someone or something to lose the chance
To survive in this world
To sustain myself?

Just thinking of it makes
My bowels turn n churn
Oh I feel so uneasy
It's really difficult to comprehend
As life means all things
Great and small, birds and fish
Fowls and bulls and goats
Oh the list goes on and on.
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Posted: Nov 2021

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southmiami4321online today!
Every living creature is created to live. Between humans and animals, we have developed a conscience sort of speak. Our thoughts mean we think of this and that. Many believe what this world has offered to them, in the path they create, their life their ways. I believe in my creator that has given me my existence and his plan to take it away when it comes. Be blessed my dear poet, every breath we take, every step we take is life. Live the now the best you can because tomorrow we don't know. SM
angel99999online today!
Hi, southmiami4321

Thank you so much for taking the time to write. You're really sweet.
love
Stay safe n blessed kiss
EXRED3
I kinda related to your poem too.
Enjoyed the read
optimisticmeonline today!
yes, life means ALL things, are you not a thing?, life means you and only you for it is YOUR life.
I enjoyed reading.
MarchMate
With life comes 3 Baggage's.. clear vision, a tender conscience and spiritual sensibility.. these are vital to a person.. The more grace men/women have in their hearts, the deeper is their sense of sin...the dead soul feels and sees nothing.. so my own personal conscience is SO strong that it is unfathomable how people can go around and live life with the knowledge of things they’ve done and people they hurt..

Based on what i've understood i wish to summarize your poem as follows- He who is not disciplined by his conscience, is disciplined by life when it evolves..
YGR33
What worries you the most in life?
angel99999online today!
Hi EXRED3wave

Thanks for the read and comment.
U might be a person who always strives to be a better person I'm sure.

Stay safe n blessed dear handshake teddybear
angel99999online today!
Hi MarchMate wave

Thank you for taking the time to read and write your thoughts my friend. handshake

There's a bigger picture in this. It is related to universal knowledge and understanding and mission crusade of such an existance.

Thank you for u'r thoughts, comfort


angel
angel99999online today!
Hi YGR33wave

To a mere existance it will be survival,
But if 1 has a path and mission given by God or one may say having universal knowledge or a force that drives one, it may differ.

This talks of the latter.
Thanks for the read and comment.
teddybear

angel
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