frost

by FoxyFairyReykjavik, Capital Region, Iceland

May 2023 443 Views 5 comments

frost

buried my toes in snow
earth so brown below
brown frozen holding down
snow all over earth like crown
I was freezing

pretty pain from one snow flake
it kept me for sure wide awake
was I something death could take
another devil for God’s sake
the frost was teasing

hand of sleep reached me so
my breath was pretty bad to blow
I should have known this years ago
like any other flying crow
the frost was pleasing

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Posted: May 2023

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southmiami4321Tampa, Florida USAMay 2, 2023

What a distinguished experience...SM

EXRED3Northumberland, England UKMay 2, 2023

loved reading your poem and the experience reading

mcradloffPlatteville, Wisconsin USAMay 5, 2023

Iceland is one of my dream trips. We had snow a few weeks ago, but now I'll have to wait for November, or maybe late October if I get lucky.

timotiePeshawar, Khyber Pakhtunkhwa PakistanMay 7, 2023

Dear F F

While reading your poem.

I felt that I was walking on snow.

Thanks for sharing.

Yankee4youSt. Albans, Vermont USAMay 13, 2023

Interesting perspective about a subject I am most familiar with.......ohh so glad its springtime......but people are still skiing in the mountains here.......