The Beauty Before My Eyes

Here we are watching the sun set into the horizon,
while her hair is blowing gentley in the wind.
I look at her and,
her eyes are shining like the midnight star.
I take her hand in mine and she has a gentle touch,
like a feather landing in my hand.
I reach over to brush her cheek,
and her skin is soft like a rabbits fur.
while I look at her,
I realize she is much more beautiful than a pure white dove.
as I lean close to her I whisper into her ear,
"you are the most beautiful thing I've ever loved".
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Posted: Jun 2010
About this poem:
I wrote this poem when I was in 9th grade and revised it only once.
I wrote this poem for someone special who left me before I could give it to her.

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agoodguy2have
W.T. - I think there's a deeper lesson here, thanks for sharing.
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