What is love?

I seem to have a hard time thinking how and what i want to say.

Not sure how to express my feelings on just a single page.

Always dreaming of the opportunity to show her how i feel.

Awakening to find myself locked in a miserable ordeal.

Trying to find the words to say that will make her mine for at least a day.

An indescribable amount of thinking "what if?
that puts me ina bliss.

Pondering the feelings of that first butterfly filled Kiss.

I'm not sure how it would all come to be.

I only know i want to hold her close to me and give my feelings their chance to finally be free;

while hoping she would feel the same way about me...

Her love is all i seek and with it i would be complete!
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Posted: Jun 2010

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agoodguy2have
well justin I think you're said it pretty well, did ya try them words on her? Must say I didn't care for the color combination though...old eyes need easy colors ;-)
caroljoyce
I really liked this, well expressed with great flow and rhyme. I think you are a good writer.
I hope you don't mind my agreeing with the old man above re the colours.Also it would read easier if you split it into shorter lines.
caroljoyce
I really liked this, well expressed with great flow and rhyme. I think you are a good writer.
I hope you don't mind my agreeing with the old man above re the colours.Also it would read easier if you split it into shorter lines.
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