Pitter Patter

Pitter-patter, pitter-patter
Hoppity-hop, ears go flop!
Silky fur, whizzing like a blur
Beady dark eyes, stocky thighs

Pitter-patter, pitter-patter
Snow-white coat, splashed with color
Browns fading, beige shading
Mocha ears, chocolate smears

Pitter-patter, pitter-patter
Twitching nose, furry, little toes
Long, back feet, somehow discrete
Tiny, round tail, body so frail

Pitter-patter, pitter-patter
Nibbling away without a single delay
Simple ways, curiosity ablaze
Small front paws, cute without flaws

Pitter-patter, pitter-patter…
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Posted: Jun 2010
About this poem:
This is just a cute lil poem I wrote about one of my rabbits. I don't usually write "happy" poems, so I figured I'd challenge myself to actually write a happy one. (:

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Comments (8)

agoodguy2have
and what a joy it was to read too!
gnj4u
Hi, kyaira,
What a wonderful celebration of love and life's Simple ways, curiosity ablaze! Thanks for sharing the Pitter-patter, pitter-patter…
Earlgreytea
'god' is everywhere, also in the 'little things'..., very nice, thank you...
caroljoyce
I loved this. I had a house rabbit and I loved him just sooooo much. He loved me back quite fiercely; rabits are incredibly intelligent and sensitive.I can smell that gorgeous rabbity, hayish smell, sweet and fresh.thanks
sophiasummer
you pitter pattered in the right direction
Very cool,
Nibbling away without a single delay
angel
ChristopherAllen
It's pretty cute....for a girl.
jazzy75
kyaira - an endearing poem for sure :) thanks for sharing!
jvaski
Any time someone on this site writes something "happy" it's a blessing ! Thank you for the cheerful poem ! cheering
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