extinguish vapors

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Jul 2010 292 Views 7 comments

extinguish the vapors

Author: Unknown

trembling darkness justified by us a heart shaped sky looking at us people crowding the sun stand up to the ones finding the light to turn the night into dawn extinguish the vapors fight the kingdoms hell war a battle to the death still of night until daytime extinguish the vapors fight fight fight

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Posted: Jul 2010

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Comments (7)

agoodguy2have

agoodguy2havesuffolk, Virginia USAJul 13, 2010

i read these 3 write and sense, with trepidation, a change....do I read?

Redex

RedexNorthumberland, England UKJul 13, 2010

Yes I too have just read all 3 together, very good follow on I wait for more now

johntheraven1

johntheraven1OPoklahoma city, Oklahoma USAJul 13, 2010

this raven is a new it is time for me to put my soul into my words

caroljoyce

caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKJul 13, 2010

Darkness may well tremble for it can never have more power than the light, not ever! Loved it!

jazzy75

jazzy75Houston, Texas USAJul 28, 2010

john....powerful poem!

johntheraven1

johntheraven1OPoklahoma city, Oklahoma USAAug 27, 2010

thanx guys

Ladybee42

Ladybee42East Liverpool, Ohio USAAug 27, 2010

you have a cool soul john whether your poems rock or otherwise,

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