When you love

When you love

You love the person who gives you the love


When you love
Your life twist around him to be the second half


When you love
You trust in every word he says

When you love
You are waiting just to see him smile

When you love
You try not to hurt

When you love
The silence replaces the words


When you love
You will be asked for each word you say and action you do

When you love
You live in another world that far away from the real life

When you love
You don’t have the sense to think

When you love
You turn completely to be none

BUT

When he gone

Your life is not worth to live
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Posted: Aug 2010

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Comments (2)

gnj4u
Hi, angelman,
When you love self is realized - hopefully, enough to sustain once the lover is gone. Sometimes even with loss, we live in another world that far away from the real life until we journey safely home.
caroljoyce
You write well and I am always awe filled for writers whose English is not their first language. This passion, however, sounds like an obsessive thing, rather than the unconditional one. Big difference, first VERY powerful. I do not think that the latter would ever 'turn you to none', more like it would add to you positively rather than subtract. I may know little about it, however.
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