Others

by Unknown

Aug 2010 374 Views 6 comments

Others

Author: Unknown

Im not the same as others
I am alone. left in the dark
do I want to see the sun feel the sun
No I stay hidden away, lock in my dark space away
Will they cry for me? ask for me? or even speak of me?
No! The lips of others they lay in silence because they no not of me
Ha! My life. The sad story of my life.
Im not the same as others so I have no life.
Im just a echo of pain.

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Posted: Aug 2010

About this poem:

some days I feel as if I dont exsist. I talk to people and they just go on their way as if im not even there. I just feel as if im better dead at times.

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hedistuffLayopolis, West Virginia USAAug 13, 2010

nice mohawk...I wish that someone would have come to me and asked me to come out and play, when I was tucked away...afraid...confused...sad......seems that everyone, at one time or another, is alone...maybe we are ever constant...often one feels this, then time passes, an event occurs, or we meet someone, or new employment, or love, or any distraction which may alter our lives...then it doesn't occur to us that we are alone, at least not as often and not as dreadfully...

MowhawkOPkin, Okinawa JapanAug 13, 2010

Thank you. its good to have an person that notice you for even a sec to make you feel great.

RedexNorthumberland, England UKAug 13, 2010

True reflections of life written good, we just have to keep smile on our face and walk back into the sun.

Ladyjjeast, Norfolk, England UKAug 13, 2010

I agree with comments both from Hedi and Redex..
This is a good write written from your heart Mowhawk..of how you feel now..
In the days..weeks..months and years to come, your life will change, as will how you see life and other's as they see you

You are the only one who has that power..