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ManicCC

Self-satisfied smile

It was never your fault,
I could never get it right.
(Right?)
I was always in the wrong,
Always started the fights.
(Fight!)
But my eyes are now wide open,
Baby now that I've see light
(I see it all now!)
so just pack your things and go
and get out of my sight.

(Chorus)
Because I know the truth now
Your words were just lies
(lies!)
You may of have me fooled once
But it’s written in your eyes
(lies!)
I can see it on your face now
It’s that look I despise
(cant stand you!)
and your sanctimonious, saccharin sweet
Self-satisfied smile

(Middle 8 break)

You said that you loved me
But it was all about control
(Control!)
I thought I was goin' Crazy
Your love took its toll
(I'm bleedin')
But now I'm standing on my own feet
I won’t be your fool
(You're leavin')
Gonna get my life back Baby
So you better go

(Chorus)
Because I know the truth now
Your words were just lies
(lies!)
You may of have me fooled once
But it’s written in your eyes
(lies!)
I can see it on your face now
It’s that look I despise
(cant stand you!)
and your sanctimonious, saccharin sweet
Self-satisfied smile
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Posted: Dec 2015
About this poem:
This is a song rather than a straight poem.
(think Loud an Heavy), Screaming guitars and a bass line you can feel in your bones
Not to everyone's tastes I know. But I would like to know what you think about it . Good or Bad,
If there are any Metalheads out there who would like to put some Music to it, PM me
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ManicCC

WHAT I SEE

I've seen the fire, that you think that you should hide.
try not to show it, bury it down deep inside.
though you don't know it I've seen the flames there in your eyes
I know you don't think it's true,
but I see more light in you than you do.

I know the darkness and the deamons that you fight.
the daily struggle just keep your soul alive
I know your stronger, and will do more than just survive
I know you cant believe it's true,
but I see more strength in you, than you do.

I want to see your shining fire,
lighting up the world
I can catch only glimpses in your eyes.
I'd like to be
one to set it free
to help you keep trying,
to set you spirit flying
so you can see in you, what I can see.

Show me your fire, don't keep it locked inside.
let me be that someone from whom you've no need to hide,
though you're not sure yet, just you look into my eyes
Then at last you'll know It's true,
I want to see and know the whole of you.
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Posted: Aug 2017
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Oceanzest

The house of love destitution

Walk me from this house of love
destitution
Gonna find me a girl for some warm
restitution
You know its open and wide
where oceans divide
I got friends along the highway side.
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Posted: Jun 2017
About this poem:
In the style of Jim Morrison, ah Jim what could have been if you hadn't have exited so early.
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PumpkinPJs

Untitled May 2nd, 2018

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Posted: May 2018
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Oceanzest

Gimme Danger - Iggy Pop and the Stooges

Gimme danger, little stranger
And I feel with you at ease
Gimme danger, little stranger
And I'll feel your disease
There's nothing in my dreams
Just some ugly memories
Kiss me like the ocean breeze

Now, if you will be my lover
I will shiver and sing
But if you can't be my master
I will do anything
There's nothing left alive
But a pair of glassy eyes
Raise my feelings one more time
Yeah!

Yeah, find a little stranger, find a little stranger
Yeah, they're gonna feel my hand
Said die a little later, why no, little stranger?
Hurry on and feel my hand
Swear you're gonna feel my hand
Swear you're gonna feel my hand

Danger
Little stranger
Danger
Little stranger
Danger
Little stranger
Danger
Little stranger
Danger
Danger
Gotta feel the pain
Gotta feel the pain
You gotta feel it
Little stranger
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Posted: Mar 2018
About this poem:
Every time I listen to this amazing track I'm amazed at how powerful the lyrics are.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1tp4srXRZDI

Agree?
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deepjohnson

Best feeling in the world

Love is the thing that keeps you up all......

Night because you would rather talk to that person than sleep....
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Posted: Dec 2018
About this poem:
Keeps your love in your heart
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Yankee4youonline today!

Country Love Song

Not going to run away from happiness
Long as you can stop me chasing after it dear
So if I’m a fool for being anything
I’m a fool for being happy seeing you
When all the busy things in life keep gettin in the way
Just ain’t making it any easier for me to say
You know all it takes is one of your smiles
And I’ll come running back five hundred miles
Why I’m loyal as an ol' tan and black coon dog
Runnin outs the woods to greet you home
And you know I won’t use no cuss words
As long as you’re around me my dear
For I feel right nothing but happiness
Whenever you come back around here
I can’t speak fast enough the thoughts that spin
Around and around trying to say the words
Everything I want to say and have them come out right
So I’m not running away from happiness
Long as you can stop me chasing after it dear
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Posted: Feb 2019
About this poem:
With just a little added country boy twang…….....
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Sunman7

Wings of an Angel

A gentle breeze brushed thru' my hair, A mystic touch from I know not where
The soft sweet scent of flowers in the air, borne on the wings of an angel
Soft beams of light through morning clouds bring warmth and hope thru' the wakening hours
Soft whispers blow through the leaves in the trees, she's near
That Angel of mine taking flight with my fear.

The deep of the night often unkind, plays games with emotions the route of my mind
My silent soul calls for a positive sign, be here soon on your Wings of an Angel
The hours do not matter the days aimless too, only worry of losing all that's come true
My long lonely journey may be ending please soon, put my fate in the care of this Angel.
A beautiful being but she only knows, was sent from somewhere I wonder who chose
This special lady holds a key to my door, she unlocks my heart with the kiss of an Angel
I've had doom and despair bring me to my knees, but I write this song with nothing to grieve
My heart it is lifting can I this time believe, she's the one with the love of an Angel.

She floats through my life like a mist from the sea, her soft sweet smile stays always with me
The love in her eyes reserved just for me, I'll always stay neath the Wings of this Angel.
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Posted: Sep 2018
About this poem:
I wrote this poem in my bedroom at a private French Chateau in central France in December 1999. It was a very difficult period in my life emotionally with someone special floating in and out of my life at will.

The writing of this poem was cathartic and helped me overcome the emotional roller coaster which was playing havoc with my working life at the Chateau at the time.
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ManicCC

PASSION'S FIRE BURNS

In the depths of passion's untamed,
Our desires unleashed and inflamed,
A connection beyond words, untold,
When bodies collide, in fervor bold.

When I feed your lust, my love,
Your body quivers, with each thrust and shove,
Each rough touch transmits ardor's fire,
A blazing testament, to our fierce desire.

To forceful dance of skin our hearts race,
Our bodies interlocked, in sacred embrace,
Your cries of pleasure, a sweet symphony,
Ignite a hunger, driving me avidly.

With every tremor, a higher peak we climb,
An ecstasy unbound, a primeval chime,
In your vulnerability, my ardor is unchained,
Our passion's fire burns, uncontained.

The boundaries of pleasure, we'll transcend,
This unbridled eroticism, will never end,
climaxing bodies trembling whole,
o*gasm, will be poetry of our souls.
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Posted: Oct 12
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fincanno

I m a dove

The dove is a dove, and always a dove.
The dear only knows, what will next prove a dove.
You, of course, are a dove but were always a dove.
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Posted: May 2019
About this poem:
Its everything about me...
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