Greetings to all women ( Archived) (12)

Aug 30, 2013 10:31 AM CST Greetings to all women
Raimo
RaimoRaimoRiihimaki, Southern Finland Finland1 Threads 1 Posts
I'm new to this site
and I would like to share a poem I wrote a few months ago.
It tells the feeling that I would like to meet...

Let love fill you.

Give your heart beats,
your love flow,
the spring creek.

It shows your face,
shine in your being,
as the spring sun

Let your love flow
spring creek like,
when your heart is filled with joy,
your eyes shine as stars.

Your luck at can you do to mask,
it shows your love for all,
it flows along your countenance
shining around you,
touching each passing
make you smile.
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Aug 30, 2013 10:35 AM CST Greetings to all women
bungallow55
bungallow55bungallow55Lakeland, Florida USA238 Threads 10 Polls 3,837 Posts
Raimo: I'm new to this site
and I would like to share a poem I wrote a few months ago.
It tells the feeling that I would like to meet...

Let love fill you.

Give your heart beats,
your love flow,
the spring creek.

It shows your face,
shine in your being,
as the spring sun

Let your love flow
spring creek like,
when your heart is filled with joy,
your eyes shine as stars.

Your luck at can you do to mask,
it shows your love for all,
it flows along your countenance
shining around you,
touching each passing
make you smile.


Raimo, sorry to disappoint you
but you came too late to the party.
All the serious women on this site
are already gone.grin
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Aug 30, 2013 10:47 AM CST Greetings to all women
cswelcome the woman here will really like that.......blues it flows...like a gentle waterfall......(niagra.falls)...blues we don't have many finnish poets on here.....the ladies will seeit as a breath of fresh air....(hurricane)....blues ..but carry on writing.....you may have a lot of spare time on your hands......best of luck.......w.shakespear....retired.rolling on the floor laughing rolling on the floor laughing dunno laugh
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Aug 30, 2013 11:10 AM CST Greetings to all women
lavina
lavinalavinaParadise, Indonesia12 Threads 4,755 Posts
cswelcome
and wish you good luck

wine
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Aug 30, 2013 11:12 AM CST Greetings to all women
abcWOMAN
abcWOMANabcWOMANLuleå, Norrbotten Sweden20 Threads 2 Polls 1,583 Posts
bungallow55: Raimo, sorry to disappoint you
but you came too late to the party.
All the serious women on this site
are already gone.



Why are you still here then?laugh handshake
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Aug 30, 2013 4:16 PM CST Greetings to all women
LadyDiz
LadyDizLadyDizJohannesburg, Gauteng South Africa1,320 Posts
bungallow55: Raimo, sorry to disappoint you
but you came too late to the party.
All the serious women on this site
are already gone.


Not cool! Maybe we are only being selective as to whom we are serious with?? grin
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Aug 30, 2013 7:27 PM CST Greetings to all women
Ocee102
Ocee102Ocee102unkown, California USA10 Threads 1,399 Posts
All women?


Ambitious.
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Aug 31, 2013 7:58 PM CST Greetings to all women
laugh true ocee, true
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Sep 2, 2013 3:00 PM CST Greetings to all women
hannali05
hannali05hannali05Santo Domingo, Distrito Nacional Dominican Republic1 Posts
Hi Raimo!! Welcome to CS.
Thanks for the poem.
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Oct 12, 2013 2:10 AM CST Greetings to all women
gypseygirley
gypseygirleygypseygirleylondon, Greater London, England UK4 Threads 89 Posts
You are so nice, why cant al men be like you. Keep well. Brenda.x
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Oct 12, 2013 6:28 AM CST Greetings to all women
pedalguy59
pedalguy59pedalguy59Burlington, Ontario Canada28 Threads 1 Polls 6,976 Posts
Raimo: I'm new to this site
and I would like to share a poem I wrote a few months ago.
It tells the feeling that I would like to meet...

Let love fill you.

Give your heart beats,
your love flow,
the spring creek.

It shows your face,
shine in your being,
as the spring sun

Let your love flow
spring creek like,
when your heart is filled with joy,
your eyes shine as stars.

Your luck at can you do to mask,
it shows your love for all,
it flows along your countenance
shining around you,
touching each passing
make you smile.


wave Just trying to decipher, maybe I need help.

" Your luck at can you do to mask. "
" It flows along your countenance."

I hope this means love.
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Oct 12, 2013 6:49 AM CST Greetings to all women
Obstinance_Works
Obstinance_WorksObstinance_WorksManchester, Greater Manchester, England UK3 Threads 1 Polls 3,514 Posts
Poets are deadly with women so long as they're about 80% cynical to 20% romantic.

Any man who is this lovey dovey in general will be hopeless with women, but if the poetry hints at a romantic core that she, and only she, can unlock then you have the woman in your hand and the balance of the world.
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