The Morning After ( Archived) (9)

Jul 7, 2007 10:49 AM CST The Morning After
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
night hides all
wounds
all sins
her cloak of shadows
smooths out the edges
faster than water
on stone
and yet
it is illusion
the claws
that hope becomes
rip deeply
carving canyons
in the trusting soul
unwomaned now
by doubt
tomorrow's dawn will rise
...on what?
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Jul 7, 2007 10:55 AM CST The Morning After
Galactic_bodhi
Galactic_bodhiGalactic_bodhiAkron, Ohio USA609 Threads 1 Polls 9,196 Posts
thumbs up

Like the rhythm in this. Very concise.

thanks
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Jul 7, 2007 10:58 AM CST The Morning After
constanza
constanzaconstanzaLA, California USA28 Threads 1 Polls 5,159 Posts
beautiful Bajanwine
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Jul 7, 2007 11:01 AM CST The Morning After
constanza
constanzaconstanzaLA, California USA28 Threads 1 Polls 5,159 Posts
on being, no justifications neededangel hug
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Jul 7, 2007 11:32 AM CST The Morning After
rwantin
rwantinrwantinRoyal Oak, Michigan USA17 Threads 8,924 Posts
Thanks for the reminder that I could hang out in CS just for the writing alone...wine
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Jul 7, 2007 11:46 AM CST The Morning After
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
what 'don't kill us' makes us stronger
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Jul 7, 2007 11:47 AM CST The Morning After
joy555
joy555joy555Akron, USA26 Threads 5,464 Posts
wave
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Jul 7, 2007 11:47 AM CST The Morning After
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
It is the main reason I come here, good writers brighten my worst days.
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Jul 7, 2007 11:49 AM CST The Morning After
constanza
constanzaconstanzaLA, California USA28 Threads 1 Polls 5,159 Posts
it will rise because it always does and always will, and it carries us with it; sheer will to survive.angel hug
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