Sea of Life ( Archived) (10)

Jul 10, 2007 9:43 PM CST Sea of Life
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classclassLiverpool, Merseyside, England UK143 Threads 809 Posts
Sea of Life

In the shining light of ecstasy with your soul laid bare to see
You'll raise your hands to touch the sun
And know there will be me

Tossed, Tussled, Squeezed and Teased, she catches the fiery spume
Of kiss and bite and touch and tell
Of jiving with the moon

Ride Roll Slap Stroll beneath the waves of cotton silky shade
Her whispers fall upon my ears
And she topples as she's bade

Her tresses dark and fragrant her nape exposed not free
She kneels before her Master
Sheathed in cloaks of necessity

And as her life expires and she finds her raison d'etre
On a golden thread of trust
She rises with a sceptre

Of sober calm considered thought abandonment and pride
Devotion Love Humility
For the one who is her guide

For on the birth of all that is when she is calmed and ready
My love will encompass her
The rock to keep her steady

My eyes shine with the Knowledge of her as I bind her sure and firm
And take her, heart and soul for me
To a place that's ours and sets us free

In sure sweet surrender in the space where she is drowned
Her sweet breaths of acquiescence rise to my soul
And the silvered clouds rain down

Feeding me, Binding Her, Taking, Aware; nurturing a life without and with care
We glide on the crest of love, and lust, growth, and truth
The ultimate sea of life that we share

In the Darkest Glow of misery, tormented soul on view
I'll lift you gently with my hands
And breathe my Love on You ...

The better for her to learn, Peace Calm and Love
The fire builds and kindles a Pure, White, Dove
And fans the sparks in kio as She climbs the golden stairs
As peaceful as can Be when one simply dares
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Jul 10, 2007 9:53 PM CST Sea of Life
loves2steppin
loves2steppinloves2steppinConcord, New Hampshire USA20 Threads 1,729 Posts
Well, Rob this is by far the best one yet in my opinion....wow...this one struck through and through.......nice job!applause
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Jul 10, 2007 9:57 PM CST Sea of Life
rwantin
rwantinrwantinRoyal Oak, Michigan USA17 Threads 8,924 Posts
Most excellent, and thank you.
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Jul 10, 2007 10:01 PM CST Sea of Life
carebear01
carebear01carebear01Mt. Dora, Florida USA48 Threads 3,918 Posts
Absolutely beautiful...
ty...wink
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Jul 10, 2007 11:52 PM CST Sea of Life
constanza
constanzaconstanzaLA, California USA28 Threads 1 Polls 5,159 Posts
angel smitten
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Jul 11, 2007 9:46 AM CST Sea of Life
starynight
starynightstarynightlakeview, Oregon USA3 Threads 382 Posts
One could sit and have a deep conversation for hours on this poem......
Lovely.....
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Jul 11, 2007 9:49 AM CST Sea of Life
sweetykat
sweetykatsweetykatLakeland, Florida USA30 Threads 1,635 Posts
wow this is breath taking thank you handshake
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Jul 11, 2007 10:51 AM CST Sea of Life
quiescent
quiescentquiescentsomewhere, USA19 Threads 1,199 Posts
Set your soul to song.

rose
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Jul 11, 2007 12:59 PM CST Sea of Life
Dandelion
DandelionDandelionSouthampton, Hampshire, UK34 Threads 5,236 Posts
Absolutely delightful...... thank you!! thumbs up wave
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Jul 11, 2007 1:11 PM CST Sea of Life
class
classclassLiverpool, Merseyside, England UK143 Threads 809 Posts
Many thanks to all.
Its strange how effortlessly thoughts can transform
into words when one has a driving force.
('applause');
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