Missing things ( Archived) (13)

Aug 26, 2007 8:10 AM CST Missing things
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
A touch, a whisper in my ear
the sense that told me
you were near
the smile that lit
your eyes, your face
the silly hat
so out of place
the heat of passion
that we shared
the truths, the fantasies
we bared, each one
of these things
calls you back
behind my eyes,
a painful lack
that roots me
ties me to the past
holds me fast
with bitter claws
embedded down
to bone.
So much to be unwoven
threads undone
to let my soul stretch
in the sun of love
and cherish yet to come
in future days.

I will not miss you
I will not let you
take my future.
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Aug 26, 2007 8:48 AM CST Missing things
rwantin
rwantinrwantinRoyal Oak, Michigan USA17 Threads 8,924 Posts
Fantastic, and really, really deep. Thank you. tip hat
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Aug 26, 2007 8:59 AM CST Missing things
foreveryoung1
foreveryoung1foreveryoung1cartagena, Murcia Spain2 Threads 1 Polls 2,984 Posts
tremendous, your poetry is great, thank you
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Aug 26, 2007 9:11 AM CST Missing things
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Hi Robert! Lovely to have you back. Missed your reviews a lot!wave
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Aug 26, 2007 9:12 AM CST Missing things
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Thank you for reading and commenting. My words are empty air without an audience.wave
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Aug 26, 2007 9:13 AM CST Missing things
Unicornelle
UnicornelleUnicornelleQuebec, Canada47 Threads 1,675 Posts
Hi,you alway's do post beautiful things..Thank you for sharing....
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Aug 26, 2007 9:18 AM CST Missing things
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Thank you for taking a moment to share with me.wave
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Aug 26, 2007 9:19 AM CST Missing things
Unicornelle
UnicornelleUnicornelleQuebec, Canada47 Threads 1,675 Posts
I alway's enjoy your post's..It was my pleasure..wave
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Aug 26, 2007 10:07 AM CST Missing things
rwantin
rwantinrwantinRoyal Oak, Michigan USA17 Threads 8,924 Posts
Thank you. And I missed the poetry a lot...! wine
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Aug 26, 2007 10:09 AM CST Missing things
HzChld
HzChldHzChldSomewhere in the middle, Oklahoma USA55 Threads 2,779 Posts
I love reading your writings bajan. Thank you for always sharing them. hug
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Aug 26, 2007 10:11 AM CST Missing things
mindfful
mindffulmindffulChicago, Illinois USA235 Threads 8 Polls 18,996 Posts
hellooooo sweet bajan!

i am so inspired
thank you

i will go and write some prose now
somewhere else that i do that-

you always lite a fire under me


thaaaank you
grin
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Aug 26, 2007 10:11 AM CST Missing things
starliteisbrite
starliteisbritestarliteisbriteThe planet earth....:), Ontario Canada56 Threads 7,327 Posts
Emotion is nice to see on paper/computer...it says much banjablue
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Aug 26, 2007 5:31 PM CST Missing things
lola36
lola36lola36dublin, Dublin Ireland120 Threads 4,687 Posts
Baja this is beautiful,thank you,love ithug kiss
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