Life goes on : (the more standard poetic offering.) ( Archived) (4)

Sep 27, 2007 9:15 PM CST Life goes on : (the more standard poetic offering.)
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Wind strokes the trees,
a lover's touch that sets
the leaves to sighing;
Rain slicks the road,
a subtle sheen
like eyes that gleam
in sultry invitation;
the slow rich dance of life
swirls past my door
tugs at the spaces
in my heart where
you once were
erasing all the shape
the touch the taste of you
to free me of the ghost
that mutes my passion
so I can bloom again.
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Sep 27, 2007 9:31 PM CST Life goes on : (the more standard poetic offering.)
kinetiknrg
kinetiknrgkinetiknrgminneapolis, Minnesota USA6 Threads 294 Posts
Very nice!applause
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Sep 27, 2007 9:34 PM CST Life goes on : (the more standard poetic offering.)
mindfful
mindffulmindffulChicago, Illinois USA235 Threads 8 Polls 18,996 Posts
indeed it does
and so we go
we think we know
all that we know
im grateful for friends like you
that remind me when
i forget whats true




kiss
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Sep 27, 2007 9:40 PM CST Life goes on : (the more standard poetic offering.)
Konigsberg
KonigsbergKonigsbergJurassic Park (Site B), Nova Scotia Canada57 Threads 3 Polls 8,448 Posts
Feeling Blue Ah? Hey .... i like when you write about Hell and Nature ...



Life is Delightfull, a Wind of Change is so close, Lady .... grin




Have a wonderful tomorrow ( as fireliter says)
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