Watching the Eclipse ( Archived) (4)

Feb 21, 2008 4:23 AM CST Watching the Eclipse
bajanblue
bajanbluebajanblueSpeightstown, Saint Peter Barbados344 Threads 1 Polls 3,724 Posts
Night wraps chilly fingers
round my neck as I lean
to see the moonlight
disappear, someone else’s
day casting shadows
on my night, giving me the dark
while they have noon
Both dark and damp
with chilly tendrils
a delicate caress
that catches at the heart
to make it shiver
as the dark becomes
complete and alone
becomes a burden
as night settles
full of silent sounds
that pulse
beneath the skin
the icy taste of fear
like knife blades
etching snowflakes
on the heartbeat in the throat
yet still I lean to see
to watch the edge of light
dissolve and start to grow
it’s only an eclipse,
light will come back
it does not last forever,
does it?
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Feb 21, 2008 5:04 AM CST Watching the Eclipse
OverTheWindow
OverTheWindowOverTheWindowChicago, Paris, Marseille, Illinois USA6 Threads 1 Polls 635 Posts
thumbs up "A delicate caress that catches at the heart".......daydream wink
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Feb 21, 2008 6:14 AM CST Watching the Eclipse
Scottishlass
ScottishlassScottishlassKnoxville, Tennessee USA491 Threads 23 Polls 3,324 Posts
Beautifully expressed thumbs up
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Feb 21, 2008 6:17 AM CST Watching the Eclipse
mindfful
mindffulmindffulChicago, Illinois USA235 Threads 8 Polls 18,996 Posts
im not even gonna read it


thanks for rubbin it in


i waited 2 wks for it and then we had complete cloud cover

harRUMPH


moping


you island girls have allll the fun

kiss
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