lusciousmile: J Holiday.I get so warm, when i watch him in his 'bed' video.He reminds me of this guy i liked, looks just like him. He is also an artist. One morning, after we made love, he played the guitar and sang to me....it was years ago, but i don't think any man has done anything that romantic for me, after getting his fill. No pun intended.
i wish i could play the guitar
but i can write will come, blighting our harbingers of spring, Glimmering of light, From which, thanks I bring, Bronze the sky, with an evening song, she can dance up a storm, she can do no wrong With sun's warmth wasted on a stone, it’s a place that she lives and she is never alone shaded by live oaks and bottlebrush trees she terrifies the Vast, she seems so at ease; High on this surface, guarding the edge of her sphere Snaps of ice cracking within her deep note we can hear Lucky the bell she is still full and deep of throat, all on its own the ocean rises up from her darks note The path of the storm who will know Swaying in unison beneath the snow, Comes up with as a means to its own end. she stands high within the trees and she watches the the storm play and she watches the wind and the sleet Whist the large branches sway.
but i can write will come, blighting our harbingers of spring, Glimmering of light, From which, thanks I bring, Bronze the sky, with an evening song, she can dance up a storm, she can do no wrong With sun's warmth wasted on a stone, it’s a place that she lives and she is never alone shaded by live oaks and bottlebrush trees she terrifies the Vast, she seems so at ease; High on this surface, guarding the edge of her sphere Snaps of ice cracking within her deep note we can hear Lucky the bell she is still full and deep of throat, all on its own the ocean rises up from her darks note The path of the storm who will know Swaying in unison beneath the snow, Comes up with as a means to its own end. she stands high within the trees and she watches the the storm play and she watches the wind and the sleet Whist the large branches sway.
I can't write poetry, sadly. Did you just write that? What inspired you when you wrote it, when you did?
Again awaken from your being gone through the back of the picture at the patch of white Standing in the way of the truth. The skeletons of the past youth writhing their stunted limbs, Archangel Winter, darkness on her back The memory of his Greely Expedition The face of a Quos ego The face of affliction well worn, and trumpet at her lips; neither does she cast where does this all end? Where is the vanishing mask? By what it seems to have moved toward? Is there loss or just betrayal? In any is it almost honey? Or is it snow? She watches the drowned snow rise from the ocean. Amid the gloom, There! On the pole, Stands black shadow within spray, Or is it just a hidden hope deep within the mind, to follow in the path of their brief embrace, Comes up with as a means to its own end. Then will sound! Then the girls face will luminance then will sound, Then the girls face will whisper, The love of one that she did not know.
Again awaken from your being gone through the back of the picture at the patch of white Standing in the way of the truth. The skeletons of the past youth writhing their stunted limbs, Archangel Winter, darkness on her back The memory of his Greely Expedition The face of a Quos ego The face of affliction well worn, and trumpet at her lips; neither does she cast where does this all end? Where is the vanishing mask? By what it seems to have moved toward? Is there loss or just betrayal? In any is it almost honey? Or is it snow? She watches the drowned snow rise from the ocean. Amid the gloom, There! On the pole, Stands black shadow within spray, Or is it just a hidden hope deep within the mind, to follow in the path of their brief embrace, Comes up with as a means to its own end. Then will sound! Then the girls face will luminance then will sound, Then the girls face will whisper, The love of one that she did not know.
You have a talent, have you had anything published?
lusciousmile: You have a talent, have you had anything published?
i have a few more. i got this girl to show me how to slow the pace down in the middle to give more of an effect
i dont really care to publish anything i have other things going on it takes ages to put something together but i am trying to find a style that is not so dark.
The viewer disappears along with the scene, the scene follows the viewer into oblivion, for scene becomes scene only through the viewer, viewer becomes viewer because of the scene And only the viewer She alone knows What this means.
jimson99: i have a few more. i got this girl to show me how to slow the pace down in the middle to give more of an effect
i dont really care to publish anything i have other things going on it takes ages to put something together but i am trying to find a style that is not so dark.
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i wish i could play the guitar
but i can write
will come, blighting our harbingers of spring,
Glimmering of light,
From which, thanks I bring,
Bronze the sky, with an evening song,
she can dance up a storm, she can do no wrong
With sun's warmth wasted on a stone,
it’s a place that she lives and she is never alone
shaded by live oaks and bottlebrush trees
she terrifies the Vast, she seems so at ease;
High on this surface, guarding the edge of her sphere
Snaps of ice cracking within her deep note we can hear
Lucky the bell she is still full and deep of throat,
all on its own the ocean rises up from her darks note
The path of the storm who will know
Swaying in unison beneath the snow,
Comes up with as a means to its own end.
she stands high within the trees
and she watches the the storm play
and she watches the wind and the sleet
Whist the large branches sway.