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by iluvisis1Springdale, Arkansas, USA

Sep 2010 493 Views 4 comments

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I cried aloud
but noone heard
the heartfelt scream
I thrust from myself
in agony as tears
filled my soul and
spilled over into a sea
of indecision and doubt
But something someone?
Love kept me afloat
Yet I'm further from the shore
Land is disappearing
Was it ever there?
Who am I?
Where do I go?

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Posted: Sep 2010

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agoodguy2havesuffolk, Virginia USASep 6, 2010

iluvisis1, sails up for great storms bring good winds...time for adventures matey. ;-)

freeatlast64847Lanagan, Missouri USASep 7, 2010

In case of emergency, Love may be used as a floatation device. Enigmatic and lovely.

gotitallDungarvan, Waterford IrelandSep 7, 2010

I would be proud, to claim this as my own, beautiful. {TDA}

Scholar_GypsyKermanshah, IranSep 22, 2010

Thanks for sharing your heart! The title and the concluding lines, so consistently, take you to the safe shore of your likes here, o' you ancient friend of our hearts!

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