The clock kicks another second as i write this comment....Thank you...nice poem...
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKSep 27, 2010
Good write, CJ
GashlyAmish Hell, Ohio USASep 27, 2010
it was a good movie, but this poem is better. thanks for sharing, summervanilla. trapped in time by our own volition, we'll all be set free someday.
SummervanillaOPMexico, Mexico City MexicoSep 27, 2010
Thanks for a compliment, freeatlast! I have good teachers :)
SummervanillaOPMexico, Mexico City MexicoSep 27, 2010
Actually this poem started from this phrase: "I can`t remember to forget you". The main character says it during the movie and when I heard the phrase it really touched me and got stuck into my brain. So the poem was born! I`m glad you like the line the same way I do :)
SummervanillaOPMexico, Mexico City MexicoSep 28, 2010
Thank you all! I`m happy you enjoyed the poem :)
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKSep 29, 2010
Thankyou SV....I really enjoyed reading this one......Andrew.....xxx
SummervanillaOPMexico, Mexico City MexicoSep 29, 2010
Unlike the movie character we have an opportunity to be free, that`s true! Thanks for your lovely comment, Gashly :)
SummervanillaOPMexico, Mexico City MexicoSep 29, 2010
I`m glad you liked the write, Andrew!
jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeSep 29, 2010
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and I love this line "I can`t remember to forget you,"
I definitely think we've all been there at one time or another.
Ty for sharing with us
CJ
I`m glad you like the line the same way I do :)
rob