Longing for your hug

I want to hug you
And never let you go,
I want to smell your hair
While the snow
Falls slowly through the air
I won`t even dare
At this precious moment
Open my eyes
That might surprise
You, but I`m still afraid to realize
I`m hugging just my pillow...
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Sep 2010
About this poem:
Loneliness shaped in words

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Comments (19)

agoodguy2have
Summervanilla, hugs are always good...a pleasant write. ;-)
Summervanilla
Thank you, AGG2H! You`re kind and supportive to every poet here:)
freeatlast64847
A lovely, talented young lady such as yourself will NOT be lonely for long... Nice write! wine
Summervanilla
FreeAtLast, I`m pleased you liked the poem! And thank you for the compliment - it`s especially dear to me as English is not my native language :)
caroljoyce
Sweetly put, girl

CJ
trurorob
well done, good ending!
rob
Summervanilla
CJ, thank you - your writings are inspiring to me :)
Summervanilla
My pleasure, Rob :)
Ladyjj
Soft write Summervanilla wine
Here's wishing that feeling will soon be replaced with love & smiles. :-)


Ljj
Redex
Ah the pillow know it well, a good take on lonelinesshug
Summervanilla
Ljj, thanks to your post it has already changed grin
Gashly
may you find your breathing pillow, summervanilla. nice piece. bouquet
Summervanilla
Thank you, Redex teddybear
Summervanilla
That`s a nice thing to say, thanks, Gashly hug
jeffc320
Lovely little ode to hugs
I liked it x
manroe23
ohhh , i already miss my pillow now , good one dear cheering
Ladybee42
very nice words
thumbs up bouquet bouquet
Summervanilla
Jeffc, actually I was thinking of naming this poem - Ode to hug - but as it`s quiet sad, I put another name:) Glad u liked it!
Summervanilla
Thank you, manroe and Ladybee :)
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