Feeling

Summervanilla

by SummervanillaMexico City, Mexico

Oct 2010 462 Views 9 comments

The Feeling

Author: Summervanilla

Music slowly plays
Evening passes by
Lonely rustling waves
Amber, golden, brown
Night is coming down
Covering it all
Hundred years in a row
Ocean kissed the shore
Later feeling comes
Yet it comes for sure...

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Posted: Oct 2010

About this poem:

Feelings - come and go like waves - sometimes softly cuddling the shore, other times crushing roughly upon it.
I encoded one of the feelings inside the poem. Hope you`ll be able to see it :)

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Comments (9)

zeus911

zeus911Malta, Xlokk MaltaOct 6, 2010

Surely a nice poem whichever way you see it, whether you take it at face value or whether you delve deeper and get the real 'feel' wave after wave... Nice work!

Summervanilla

SummervanillaOPMexico, Mexico City MexicoOct 6, 2010

I`m glad u liked it, thank you, zeus :)

freeatlast64847

freeatlast64847Lanagan, Missouri USAOct 6, 2010

Melancholy can be sad, but when hidden in a poem it's fun! Nice write!

Gashly

GashlyAmish Hell, Ohio USAOct 6, 2010

nice, summervanilla, clever and you captured it so well. nothing wrong with melancholy, at least it's a beautiful sounding word.

Summervanilla

SummervanillaOPMexico, Mexico City MexicoOct 7, 2010

I`m happy you got it right! Thank you for the comments, fal and gashly->

caroljoyce

caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKOct 7, 2010

This is beautiful, thankyou
CJ

trurorob

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainOct 8, 2010

clever write, nicely melancholic!
rob

serpico12

serpico12cardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKOct 8, 2010

beautiful piece of poetry inspirational..good work..

Summervanilla

SummervanillaOPMexico, Mexico City MexicoOct 9, 2010

Thank you all for reading and for your lovely comments! I`m truly glad you liked the piece :)

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