Grain of sand

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Nov 2010 417 Views 14 comments

Grain of sand

Author: Unknown

I am a grain of sand
On Universe's beach,
Washed by life's waves
Blowed by years wind.

I am a grain of sand
With thoughts and dreams,
In this huge Universe
I am a part of anything.

I am a grain of sand
Insignificant, so small,
Earth tourns continuosly
Whatever... I am here or not...

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Posted: Nov 2010

About this poem:

Thinking about...individual..as part of Universe..

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kickit22auburn, Washington USANov 13, 2010

compared to the universe we are small but we are not insignificant cause our creator has created this for us. that just show you how much God loves us he gave us the universe.

love the write.

keesy45OPoldenburg, Lower Saxony GermanyNov 13, 2010

Thank you kickit..we are not insignificant indeed...I'm reffering to..comparing with the huge Universe..

mike7375Castleblayney, Monaghan IrelandNov 13, 2010

Nice Keesy, and I'm with you on this one

keesy45OPoldenburg, Lower Saxony GermanyNov 13, 2010

Thank you mike..how small we are isn't??

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USANov 13, 2010

Love it keesy..The universe..Big stuff..cafetwo

freeatlast64847Lanagan, Missouri USANov 13, 2010

The grain of sand is to the earth, as the earth is to the galaxy, as the galaxy is to the universe. Mind blowing!

keesy45OPoldenburg, Lower Saxony GermanyNov 13, 2010

Thank you Cafe..

keesy45OPoldenburg, Lower Saxony GermanyNov 13, 2010

Thank you free...your opinion..it's also mine..we are a part of it..the Universe..

Ladybee42East Liverpool, Ohio USANov 13, 2010

yea, I get that feeling sometimes - being as tiny and insignificant as a grain of sand - well put..

keesy45OPoldenburg, Lower Saxony GermanyNov 13, 2010

Thank you ladybee...it is not that we are insignificant..but the way we feel in certain moments..so small..and everything happen on Eart and in Univers..without us being involved..

caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKNov 15, 2010

Lovely thoughtful write; Each grain is vital though, as part of the whole,
cj

keesy45OPoldenburg, Lower Saxony GermanyNov 15, 2010

Yes...carol..we are so small but part of anything...

Thank you!

beautifulyouNew York, USADec 7, 2010

We are so small but so "everything" all at the same time.

Love this write; it's so thoughtful, humble, yet expansive.

Ty for this sharing keesy.

keesy45OPoldenburg, Lower Saxony GermanyDec 7, 2010

Thank you..you're really beautiful..

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