Pies

by Timmyschristchurch, Canterbury, New Zealand

Nov 2010 339 Views 5 comments

Pies

sometimes I eat pies,with a side of fries,

mince,chicken watever you please,
bacon & egg, stake & cheese, some like pies hot some like pies cold but for me eating pies never gets old

ketchup no thanks I'll have watties on mine,
some have it plain & with me thats fine
down the hatch 123,just right on time

Let me bid you farewell at the end of this rythm.......

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Nov 2010

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Comments (5)

keesy45oldenburg, Lower Saxony GermanyNov 22, 2010

I like pies too but sweet and a lot of weepcream...

Nice poem...

niah9Auckland, New ZealandNov 23, 2010

When I saw PIES...I thought surely that's not a NZ poet....
Bingo...
even Watties...not ketchup...
Timmys welcome if you are new, you made me smile...
like your style...

Niah from jaffaville

TimmysOPchristchurch, Canterbury New ZealandNov 23, 2010

Thanks guys I appreciate the feedback :)

pinkcoralNaha, Okinawa JapanNov 23, 2010

I like you said
down the hatch 123 just right on time.
chocolate pie is always right on time for me.
this is so delicious poem hummmm yummy.
Thank you for sharing your pie.

paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandNov 23, 2010

Nice entrance with Pies,Welcome Timmy,Have a good day.