Im Coming Back For More

by ReaderOfSoulsunknown, Texas, USA

Dec 2010 768 Views 6 comments

I'm Coming Back For More

I'm not the kind to stick around without it
It'd be a crime 'cause darlin' I'm all about it
It's in my blood, it keeps me breathing
It's like a drug, gotta have the feeling

It's been awhile since I've seen your face
What a shame, what a waste

I've been up, I've been down, I've been kicked to the ground
But I can't get my mind off of you
So I keep moving on to a place I belong
Hopin' you wanted me to

I'm better than I was before
I'm knockin' at your door
I'm comin' back for more
Yeah, I need a little more

I keep comin' back..back... back

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Posted: Dec 2010

About this poem:

Keep coming home to the man I love at day's end.

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Comments (6)

agoodguy2havesuffolk, Virginia USADec 16, 2010

R.O.S. - like a fine country song i can hear the strummin' guitar in the background, and you singin' your favorite ol' song! ;-)

jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeDec 17, 2010

its a very nice song too,,wonderful poem madam,thanks for sharing

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USADec 17, 2010

Hi, ReaderOfSouls,
Oh, this the season to celebrate when one has a relationship about which one can say, I keep comin' back..back... back in a good way!

niah9Auckland, New ZealandDec 17, 2010

WORDS...we twist them, adapt them and fine tweak them to fit our thoughts...and they can end any way we wish....lovely poem ROS..never knew which path it would follow...you sure kept me guessing this time...Niah

FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKDec 17, 2010

Hi ROS

A poem with a thousand nuances written with a depth of feeling. This is an outstanding write.

Bill

ReaderOfSoulsOPunknown, Texas USADec 17, 2010

Hi folks! Thank you so much for your kind words.

I try to bring a bit of happiness what I feel for my husband into this particular piece. Winding and wending words until they fit and made sense. My husband travels a great deal for his job and if I'm not in the saddle doing ranch work, I'm in town with the detective work, so we spend a lot of time apart. When we are together, it is magical. :) Eighteen years of marriage and it is still magic. :)I always hold a prayer for each of you that you may find the love that will speak like this. :)My greatest Christmas wish is that love will find it's way to you. :)