Lead me,please..

I want to be the best writer
I want to throw that punch like no other fighter
My passion has never known a greater height
But still,i'm overtaken by fright.

The zeal marvels me within
Sometimes i sit & ponder if this is really me
Is it a reality or a dream
That whenever i hold my pen,i feel a new being.

Can i ever be greater than Shakesphere?
Can i write so freely with great flair?
It's like with a single line i convince you the world is a sphere
Like always doing things that can never be compared.

But still,i admit to defeat
Bowing my head while my heart grieves
Though it's never easy to admit
I can only be the best if you lead me up the cliff.

Lead me,please...
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Posted: Dec 2010
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Let's help each other grow.let's hold hands & never let go.

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thesunandthesea
bouquet sometimes i want someone to lead me too.//handshake I liked this poem!! ^_^ thumbs upNICE WRITE SAMMYJOSH!!! cheers
pilgrimageoflove
"Can i ever be greater than Shakesphere?"

You can only be who you are.

That will happen when you "get lost" in your writing, I've heard.

Keep writing
Sammyjosh13
Thanks,mate.
marikia
No, my friend, this is a very speedy and unwise surrender - don't ever give up, and you do not need someone to lead you up - don't ask to be led - you are the one who should be making decisions. With a steady and hard work ahead you will make it - you are already on the right path. And the starting point is - your heart. You have it - your heart abounds in sympathy and love. Hope, you will find all this helpful. Nice poem, keep writing.
HotrodLarrys
I agree with the above, To me, you can be whatever you want to be, before you finish, you must start, this can be the Beginning.....If that what you want it to be, That is only within You.. nice write.. Hotrodhandshake
Sammyjosh13
To:everybody

Thanks a million.
I know i can only be me but shakesphere is so admirable & that was why i used him.

Let's keep writing.
SUMMIT09
TAKE ALL THE ADVICE. LOOK INTO YOURSELF AND WRITE ALL THAT FEEL, LOOK OUTSIDE YOURSELF AND WRITE ALL YOU SEE. THIS IS WHAT MAKE YOU GET BETTER. WRITE ALL THATS IN YOUR HEART.
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