I want to be the best writer I want to throw that punch like no other fighter My passion has never known a greater height But still,i'm overtaken by fright.
The zeal marvels me within Sometimes i sit & ponder if this is really me Is it a reality or a dream That whenever i hold my pen,i feel a new being.
Can i ever be greater than Shakesphere? Can i write so freely with great flair? It's like with a single line i convince you the world is a sphere Like always doing things that can never be compared.
But still,i admit to defeat Bowing my head while my heart grieves Though it's never easy to admit I can only be the best if you lead me up the cliff.
Lead me,please...
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Posted: Dec 2010
About this poem:
Let's help each other grow.let's hold hands & never let go.
No, my friend, this is a very speedy and unwise surrender - don't ever give up, and you do not need someone to lead you up - don't ask to be led - you are the one who should be making decisions. With a steady and hard work ahead you will make it - you are already on the right path. And the starting point is - your heart. You have it - your heart abounds in sympathy and love. Hope, you will find all this helpful. Nice poem, keep writing.
I agree with the above, To me, you can be whatever you want to be, before you finish, you must start, this can be the Beginning.....If that what you want it to be, That is only within You.. nice write.. Hotrod
Sammyjosh13OPMadrid, SpainDec 23, 2010
To:everybody
Thanks a million. I know i can only be me but shakesphere is so admirable & that was why i used him.
Let's keep writing.
SUMMIT09DALLAS, Texas USADec 27, 2010
TAKE ALL THE ADVICE. LOOK INTO YOURSELF AND WRITE ALL THAT FEEL, LOOK OUTSIDE YOURSELF AND WRITE ALL YOU SEE. THIS IS WHAT MAKE YOU GET BETTER. WRITE ALL THATS IN YOUR HEART.
Comments (7)
You can only be who you are.
That will happen when you "get lost" in your writing, I've heard.
Keep writing
Thanks a million.
I know i can only be me but shakesphere is so admirable & that was why i used him.
Let's keep writing.