Drops of Red

Drops of red
Sharp steel pushes down gently on milky skin,
The slight pop as it gives way,
Slides easily along the cut opening a line.

She watches the red line form,
The perfect drop of blood like a jewel,
It gathers all the pent up feeling inside her,
Hangs like a perfect tear for a few seconds,
Then falls to the ground.

She feels the weight of her heart drop,
And the lightness of releasing all the hurt.

The tears now able to fall and run like a river,
Her eyes cleansing her soul.

And the carm washes over her once more...
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Posted: May 2013
About this poem:
A very close friend once told me cutting herself was the only way she could cry,
Was sad, kind of thougt it must be like this.

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timotie
LadyJ.
The tearscrying now able to fall and run like a river

Her eyes cleansing her Soul.:: heart wings

I cn't see you Crying
Be happy always my
Sweet Friend.applause

hug dancing :
: Dorps of Red thumbs up
darkhorse555
so much hurt yet beautifully pennedthumbs up angel
Yankee4you
I hate needles myself. cool
steve1223
Sometimes people who self harm find that this is the only thing they have control over

bouquet
ladyjewel
Wow steve good insighthug kiss

Liam i know its so sad hug
Arteee
Beautiful write ladyjewel so sad!... to some it is a way of dealing with their pain... Thank you for sharing..
angel thumbs up wine
madtat29
I wrote something once along these lines...someone I knew once was a cutter ..it is very sad...be well ladyjewel sad flower conversing
fjamesj9701
Touching piece, i knew a cutter, may of even knew more because they hide it. You Colored it well... wine
Fellsman
Dear LJ

The facade we all present to the outside world can often be entirely at odds with what we really feel deep inside.

Harming oneself is a cri de couer: One can scarcely imagine what demons possesses anyone to seek attention by such drastic means.

A fine write...

Bill hug gift
Serenity4two
Hi LJ
I have come across this many times in my nursing career--
it is so terribly sad , that some people feel the need to do this to themselves --children/ teenagers and adults --
Issues relating to control and self loathing can be so traumatic for the person involved and their families and friends .
From my heart , I hope your dear friend will be ok and I am sure she is receiving good help and support from those who love her most --Fiona hug
soulgoddess
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ladyjewel
So many year's ago and she has healed to some degree, but it continues with two sisters.

Incrediblely sad that you need to hurt yourself to feel at 13sad flower
Mizzy4
Very well written poem on what is such a poignant topic ladyjewel. Good work.

Mick.
hug
lovecanbereal
Well put, lj, exquisite writing...






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