"Someone Special"

There is a time in your life
When love and hurt comes into play
You just shrug it off
Tomorrows another day

But you know deep inside
That there was a little spark
It was about to come alive

Little did you know someone special
There you thought,the knock on the front door
Eventhough things go so well
It makes your feelings and heart swell

When you turn out the lights
Usually it means noones home
But sometimes there is
They just want to be alone

That is a sign the person is stuck
They cannot move on,no such luck
So just keep moving,and wish them well
Even if it sometimes hurts like hell

Relationships,come and go
Playing around because that is all they know
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Posted: Jan 2011
About this poem:
I wrote this poem especially for the people who are on this site....who have been delt a hand that is not worth playing.....fold

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LimitedAddition
I liked the poem, maybe because I’m no stranger to the second last verse crying
ng970
Thank you LA for reading my poem,I know there is more than a few people who can relate to this poem.......the point is if your on this site...try to be sensible,do not let something good go...because of pride or egotistical bs.....

ng970
beautifulyou
Very nice job ng9!

I think many can relate.

And I think this stanza says it all ~~

"That is a sign the person is stuck
They cannot move on,no such luck
So just keep moving,and wish them well
Even if it sometimes hurts like hell"



Even though it can hurt like hell, if you're not mutually in the same place the relationship will go nowhere fast.. I love how you add "and wish them well."

That's beautiful because even though it may hurt to let go, wishing that person well frees both people to be where they're honestly at.


bouquet
ng970
That is my point exactly,you hit the nail right on the head beautiful you....you understand perfectly...thank you for the wonderful comment,it is greatly appreciated...

ng970
beautifulyou
You're quite welcome hug

Truly a great write!
ng970
Let me just say that I have almost read all of your poetry....and you have a great way of expression....


ng970
QuietStormF
Amazing poem, that I can sooo relate to.. Thanks so much for sharing it here with us! hug teddybear bouquet
ng970
Thank you quietstorm,I wanted to share this poem because,it really does not pertain to age,whether your 20 or 60,there is a point in your life when,it is better just to give a person a chance,instead of hiding what you are really feeling...we all have been hurt once or twice in our lives....give in,you never know that person can be THE ONE.....

ng970
pilgrimageoflove
a rare insight!

Let him/her go
you never know
why others do
what they do
their reason may
not be you.

well done
ng970
Thank you for posting your comment pilgrimageoflove....your comments are always nice and straightfoward.....I am glad you enjoyed reading.........
Fellsman
Nice write ng, you have captured the angst experienced by most in this perceptive poem:

Best wishes

Bill rose
ng970
Thank you Sir Fellsman...it is always a pleasure to hear your feedback....I am a big fan of your poetry.....this is usually not my style of writing...but I said what the heck.....simple but right to the point.....

ng970
niah9
Baggage....a friend told me he only looks forward...which is great advice....I understood the poem..... maybe that means been there done that...hopefully moved on...Niahgrin cool
ng970
I agree with you 100% niah,if the person is stuck on a one way street,when can you even hit a highway with multiple lanes......sometimes it is just better to take the exit....
thank you for your wonderful comment....

ng970
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