rebirth

As I surrender to the divine
I'll feel my feelings
not discount them
I wont suppress from fear to feel
But trust in the wisdom of my emotions
I,ll build new tracks within my brain
to replace the old tracks worn and flayed
Infused with spirit of my true self
of smiles and courage to stand up for myself
This journey is a spiritual death to all the negative I was fed
And in my rebirth I shall find the beauty of me to share and respond
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jan 2011
About this poem:
Just something I needed to put to hard copy.
Out of head on to paper
Now Im free to go and play

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Earlgreytea
I needed to read this today, thank you so much...
jazzy75
Oh....I just love your poem...it touched me deeply...thank you for sharing!angel
pilgrimageoflove
moonontide

"in my rebirth I shall find the beauty of me to share and respond"

Yes you will!
Thanks for sharing
niah9
I do so understand...it's like drawing a line under it...and sometimes we need to focus on the past to step into the future with ease...nice one...Niahcheering teddybear
Ladybee42
This is really lovely moonontide, full of feeling and perhaps a sense of that surrender that Earlgreytea has so recently mentioned to us.

thumbs up bouquet bouquet
thesunandthesea
lips strength write!! I've always loved this kind of poem... It helps gain energy/power.^_^ lol understand me?? \(-_-)/ hard to tell u how I really feel in Eng but I loved it!!! ^__^ keep going)))) flower

moonontide, your name is soft n romantic but your write is strength N -> thumbs up

'rebirth'
thumbs up
SUMMIT09
I FEEL YOU ON THIS I HAVE TAKEN THIS JOURNEY AND I LOVE IT.
SOMETIMES I FEEL SCARED BUT HOW CAN I TREAD THE PRESENT WHEN I KEEP TRYING SLIP BACK TO THE PAST.
Fellsman
Hi Moonontide

A very uplifting poem and quite cathartic. If you don't mind me mentioning, I did find the small grey text on that deep red background very difficult to read... probably because my eyes are not as good as they once were... dunno

Kindest regards

Bill
moonontide
Thankyou Fellsman
Yes. :))) I love the colour red but it didnt work out here at all.At first glance one could be forgiven for not reading it.Will try and edit it I think :))
moonontide
Thankyou sun and sea.I like that.bouquet
moonontide
Yes Summit09
The past the present the future. Three links.
Although
Yesterday is history(it is still relevant
Tomorrow a mystery (dreams)
Today is a gift ( use it to the we can)
Life is a slippery slidey rollercoaster.cheering
sophiasummer
As you are moontide.... share and respond

But know thine self

Infused with spirit of my true self

I comfort you and yet release you on your journey.
Its all about YOU!!!


fear shall never follow,

Love Sophia
xx

bouquet
gnj4u
Hi, moonontide,
I,ll build new tracks within my brain to replace the old tracks worn and flayed... The work of rebirth continues, feelings included! Safe journey!
moonontide
Thankyou Sophiasummer
Fear is such an all encompassing scurge.It robs us of life.
I wont succumb.teddybear
moonontide
gnj4u
And a safe journey back to you.
Thanku.cheering
DropTheI
you have shared and respondec through this poem, beautifuly.
elo777
all your poems were beautiful. but I would like to recognize that that this one helped me on a personal level....elo..wave
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