As I surrender to the divine I'll feel my feelings not discount them I wont suppress from fear to feel But trust in the wisdom of my emotions I,ll build new tracks within my brain to replace the old tracks worn and flayed Infused with spirit of my true self of smiles and courage to stand up for myself This journey is a spiritual death to all the negative I was fed And in my rebirth I shall find the beauty of me to share and respond
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Posted: Jan 2011
About this poem:
Just something I needed to put to hard copy. Out of head on to paper Now Im free to go and play
Oh....I just love your poem...it touched me deeply...thank you for sharing!
pilgrimageofloveSydney, New South Wales AustraliaJan 16, 2011
moonontide
"in my rebirth I shall find the beauty of me to share and respond"
Yes you will! Thanks for sharing
niah9Auckland, New ZealandJan 16, 2011
I do so understand...it's like drawing a line under it...and sometimes we need to focus on the past to step into the future with ease...nice one...Niah
strength write!! I've always loved this kind of poem... It helps gain energy/power.^_^ lol understand me?? \(-_-)/ hard to tell u how I really feel in Eng but I loved it!!! ^__^ keep going))))
moonontide, your name is soft n romantic but your write is strength N ->
'rebirth'
SUMMIT09DALLAS, Texas USAFeb 2, 2011
I FEEL YOU ON THIS I HAVE TAKEN THIS JOURNEY AND I LOVE IT. SOMETIMES I FEEL SCARED BUT HOW CAN I TREAD THE PRESENT WHEN I KEEP TRYING SLIP BACK TO THE PAST.
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKFeb 2, 2011
Hi Moonontide
A very uplifting poem and quite cathartic. If you don't mind me mentioning, I did find the small grey text on that deep red background very difficult to read... probably because my eyes are not as good as they once were...
Kindest regards
Bill
moonontideOPSydney, New South Wales AustraliaFeb 2, 2011
Thankyou Fellsman Yes. :))) I love the colour red but it didnt work out here at all.At first glance one could be forgiven for not reading it.Will try and edit it I think :))
moonontideOPSydney, New South Wales AustraliaFeb 2, 2011
Thankyou sun and sea.I like that.
moonontideOPSydney, New South Wales AustraliaFeb 2, 2011
Yes Summit09 The past the present the future. Three links. Although Yesterday is history(it is still relevant Tomorrow a mystery (dreams) Today is a gift ( use it to the we can) Life is a slippery slidey rollercoaster.
Hi, moonontide, I,ll build new tracks within my brain to replace the old tracks worn and flayed... The work of rebirth continues, feelings included! Safe journey!
moonontideOPSydney, New South Wales AustraliaFeb 2, 2011
Thankyou Sophiasummer Fear is such an all encompassing scurge.It robs us of life. I wont succumb.
moonontideOPSydney, New South Wales AustraliaFeb 2, 2011
gnj4u And a safe journey back to you. Thanku.
DropTheInew york, New York USAFeb 2, 2011
you have shared and respondec through this poem, beautifuly.
elo777santa cruz, California USAAug 14, 2011
all your poems were beautiful. but I would like to recognize that that this one helped me on a personal level....elo..
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"in my rebirth I shall find the beauty of me to share and respond"
Yes you will!
Thanks for sharing
moonontide, your name is soft n romantic but your write is strength N ->
'rebirth'
SOMETIMES I FEEL SCARED BUT HOW CAN I TREAD THE PRESENT WHEN I KEEP TRYING SLIP BACK TO THE PAST.
A very uplifting poem and quite cathartic. If you don't mind me mentioning, I did find the small grey text on that deep red background very difficult to read... probably because my eyes are not as good as they once were...
Kindest regards
Bill
Yes. :))) I love the colour red but it didnt work out here at all.At first glance one could be forgiven for not reading it.Will try and edit it I think :))
The past the present the future. Three links.
Although
Yesterday is history(it is still relevant
Tomorrow a mystery (dreams)
Today is a gift ( use it to the we can)
Life is a slippery slidey rollercoaster.
But know thine self
Infused with spirit of my true self
I comfort you and yet release you on your journey.
Its all about YOU!!!
fear shall never follow,
Love Sophia
xx
I,ll build new tracks within my brain to replace the old tracks worn and flayed... The work of rebirth continues, feelings included! Safe journey!
Fear is such an all encompassing scurge.It robs us of life.
I wont succumb.
And a safe journey back to you.
Thanku.