Be still little bird the cage you are in is of your own making it is time now to stop those fluttering wings like you cannot escape within your cage You can and you will the time is near
And you will fly to the top of the sky and you will fly free because you see
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Posted: Jan 2011
About this poem:
Life is a journey of learning. Looking within and accepting that this place is the place you are meant to be at this part of the journey leaves you free to take the next step.
I would also encourage the little bird to fly ... and not be still ... for it is time now to fly ... nice poem and full of hopes for escape in the nearest future.
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niah9Auckland, New ZealandJan 11, 2011
It's funny how at times in our life, a poem fits our feelings perfectly...thank you for that moment...Niah
moonontideOPSydney, New South Wales AustraliaJan 11, 2011
Thanku Marikia Good advise.The bird is listening.
moonontideOPSydney, New South Wales AustraliaJan 11, 2011
Im pleased I connected Niah.Courage can be stepped into but it does have an uncanny way of deserting us if we lose focus.Thankyou for your comments. Its good to be here.
moonontideOPSydney, New South Wales AustraliaJan 11, 2011
Thankyou Pilgrimageoflove I like your return
The door to your cage You left open you see But your inner rampage Kept your vision blurred
Very insightful
DropTheInew york, New York USAJan 11, 2011
one flap at a time
ng970brownsville, Texas USAJan 11, 2011
sometimes our feelings are caged,and that is what i think this poem is about....being locked in silence...but eventually that silence is broken...and we are finally free to express are true emotions....good write....thankyou for sharing....
beautifulyouNew York, USAJan 11, 2011
I love this write.
It is superb in its nature, meaning, message.
Ty for posting this work of art.
"Be still...."
Bravo!
EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusJan 12, 2011
Hi, Moonontide, short, sweet and memorable, thanks for sharing...
Comments (10)
Fly and be free
Now you can see
It was all absurd
For....
The door to your cage
You left open you see
But your inner rampage
Kept your vision blurred
Good advise.The bird is listening.
I like your return
The door to your cage
You left open you see
But your inner rampage
Kept your vision blurred
Very insightful
It is superb in its nature, meaning, message.
Ty for posting this work of art.
"Be still...."
Bravo!