nice write , nice rhyme!I love its rhyme n meaning!!! AND I 10000% agree with Macduff! you could sing this! ^_^ It'd match Jazz or slow song..\\(^0^)\ If u sing, I will do slow dance with Macduff. lol >> >> but I think Macduff dances like => hiphop/rap? eiei kiddin' // SAS
Yes, a nice song it would be if sung. What is ever better to share than promise of a life to always care and be together! My good friend poet advised to always Assume the Best, as she put it. This song fills me with hope on this bright sunny morning. Thank you, ROS.
Hi, ReaderOfSouls, Meet me in the in-between is such a wonderful line opening to mystery and adventure, sans a palindrome going first one way and then the other.
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Sweet surrender on the line
Now it's time to say "I'm fine"
We'll see each other one more time
C'mon and speak to me.
May you read, sweet lady what you see.
get the jandals on, walk the beach..
Soph
xx
You have no idea how good a beach walk sounds right now. A beach vacation sounds like heaven. *sighs contentedly*
Sunny and Macduff,
It sounded like a song to me as well as I wrote it, I had a vision of playing my chanter to it. It would work as a jig or a reel. :)
Earlier replies note the melodic rhythm, there is also an enigmatic element which confirms the author as a lady of mystery.
An enjoyable read.
Best wishes
Bill
Meet me in the in-between is such a wonderful line opening to mystery and adventure, sans a palindrome going first one way and then the other.
Love and life is a mystery that should be explored. :) I'm so glad you liked this. :)