Always had a life of rejection, All i've ever wanted is love and affection. Always sitting alone in my bed, With all kind of thoughts bombarding my head. Always had the feeling of lonliness, And a constant feeling of worthlessness.
Sometime in the year 2009, I started talking to someone i never thought would be mine. In 2010 this person i met, And now i feel that my life is set. In many years time i am want to be, The way i am now just you and me.
I want you to forever be mine, Up until the end of time. I feel you are my destiny, So please keep me from being free. I want you by my side forever, Going through good and bad times together.
Just hang in there flame....we all have rainbows....well written too. Niah
Flame88OPNorwich, Norfolk, England UKJan 25, 2011
I know... I just hope that rainbow is soon in the distance. Im sure it will :) thank you again for your comment :) x
Flame88OPNorwich, Norfolk, England UKJan 30, 2011
To all reading. When writing this it just flowed out. It kind of suprised me to be honest :) I had never written this way. Maybe thats what love does to you?
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pilgrimageofloveSydney, New South Wales AustraliaJan 30, 2011
poetry IS love flame
Flame88OPNorwich, Norfolk, England UKJan 30, 2011
I hadnt thought of that :) Thankyou. But i dont find it the kinda love mentioned in this poem???? I love writing for several reason. Its so relaxing. Thankyou again for bringin that to my attention :) Im grateful for that
Flame88OPNorwich, Norfolk, England UKFeb 1, 2011
Just reading back through some of my comments on my poems and noticed the one on this where i said about it just flowing out. I hadnt really written anything for a year or two and in that time if i did i found it really difficult to write. I was impressed when i wrote this. Not only had i managed to start writing again but also how different it was the older ones i had written.
Hi, Flame88, In many years time i am want to be, The way i am now just you and me. May the past and the present yield to ...a hopeful future as the world and the world of love await the poet!
Flame88OPNorwich, Norfolk, England UKFeb 2, 2011
Thank you for your comment. :) I keep my fingers crossed that it does. For every bad there is a good. I hope that it is now time for some good. :)
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When writing this it just flowed out. It kind of suprised me to be honest :) I had never written this way. Maybe thats what love does to you?
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But i dont find it the kinda love mentioned in this poem????
I love writing for several reason. Its so relaxing. Thankyou again for bringin that to my attention :) Im grateful for that
I was impressed when i wrote this. Not only had i managed to start writing again but also how different it was the older ones i had written.
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In many years time i am want to be, The way i am now just you and me. May the past and the present yield to ...a hopeful future as the world and the world of love await the poet!
I keep my fingers crossed that it does. For every bad there is a good. I hope that it is now time for some good. :)
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