JOHN DOE

vacant heart sacred stars of space.
transparent lies of an unknown race.
all the things i leave behind as i go.
into the nothing where there's no hope.
the people scream of losing time.
when we push the limits to rewrite.
i am someone don't tell me im not.
so the rivers dry the people rise.
just to wake up living life up.
screams of silence waiting tired of the dawn.
driving into the razors above the calms.
as i can see lifetimes away looking back at what i got.
i am someone don't tell me im not.
poison in our vains as life rots.
vines growing from bottom to top.
vacant replacements of a human.
no heart to feel not alone.
no feelings burn in the soul.
damn it we are supost to know.
every country is getting to full.
and life is vengeance and cruel.
bringing us down into a blood drenched pool.
this guy named john doe.
i am someone don't tell me im not.
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Posted: Jan 2011

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Macduff5
Stillframe I'm alwys amazed at your poetry. It's so honest. Keep it coming mate. handshake
stillframe
thanks my friend
andrew149
I'm impressed mate, really....nice one.....Andrewcool
stillframe
thanks my friend
thesunandthesea
"I am someone don't tell me I'm not!"thumbs up thumbs up thumbs up

thumbs up I loved the above sentense the most! ^_^ Keep going))) keep writing))))bouquet You are someone who has ability to write and love to write , then .... just write! ^____^ Cheers, @^___^@ S&s rose
pilgrimageoflove
powerful poetry stillframe.

"as i can see lifetimes away looking back at what i got.
i am someone don't tell me im not."

You certainly are stillframe
stillframe
thanks my friends
gnj4u
Hi, stillframe,
Wherever we go, there is hope; else, we are merely taken. There is such powerful emotion in screams of silence waiting tired of the dawn. driving into the razors above the calms. The poem screams for recognition of the soul - and gets it!
stillframe
thanks my friend
jazzy75
Strong poem John!
stillframe
thanks very much my friend
Ladybee42
'vacant replacements of a human'
a most frightening thought!
good strong write stillframe,

thumbs up bouquet
stillframe
thanks my friend
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