stillness

im trapped in a stillframe.
not just a home but a name.
never moving just standing still.
there's no touch how can i even feel.
there's only darkness nothing is real.
just me alone just standing still.
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Posted: Mar 2011

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Redex
Stillframe, in this corner you are never alone, you are your own destiny.hug
stillframe
some of my friends who say there my friends and are not would disagree with you thanks anyway my friend
jazzy75
john...stirring poem...and well expressed.hug
stillframe
thanks my friend
gnj4u
Hi, stillframe,
This is such a heartfelt write. No matter what power there is in a name, it is always ours to claim and from any potential trap be freed. Community can help to empower us - the more we give to it, the more it can return to us. But, in the end, it is our eyes alone that can see our true reality.
stillframe
thanks my friends
La_Luna
Short, but straight to the point.

Good poem :)
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