Door of Clouds

Above the clouds dark and grey
slowly walked the sky
hiding the sun
from view

Then all the scene changed
as clouds rearranged
for photograph session
each one took a side

The side became a door
top sides and bottom
hanging in space
as the sun passed through

Surreal as the sun
in a watery vapour
passage to heaven
open and clear

The eyes photograph
the mind prints the image
of a door with a difference
made of clouds in the sky



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agoodguy2have suffolk, Virginia USA
Sat Aug 28, 2010 2:24 PM WET
serpico, a nice opening vision, well snapped. ;-)
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Posted: Feb 2011
About this poem:
done under my previous serpico 12

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SCatlyn
What an unusual, beautiful poem. Really enjoyed this! bouquet
christian22
hi there scatlyn, thank you so very much for posting a reply on this one, as always your replies are so welcome and mean a lot.wine
SCatlyn
Wow... amazing poem! (My previous comment was actually quite a few months ago)

Just love "as clouds rearranged for photograph session...", "The eyes photograph, the mind prints the image..." and many more great, descriptive lines! peace rose
christian22
good morning scatlyn, and hey thank you for your second reply on this poem, thank you so much for that glowing response, and for sharing the lines that took your attention, thanks dear lady.wine
boyshchrm6
Well described images of naturethumbs up wow angel
jazzy75
beautiful, an opening shot wellteddybear
christian22
hi boyscharm thanks a lot for your contribution to the poem, appreciate it..
christian22
hi jazzy, thank you too for that kind thought, thanks for viewing the poem.
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