Life's Sea

When sailing on the ocean
One can term the sea of life
Calm waters soothe my vessel
Sea breezes softly blow
But when storms rise
Lifting waves up high
Storms touching me
Buffeted, blown
Driven off my course
Damaged by wind and rain
Where our way is lost
Lighthouse near the shore
Seen you there before
Shine your light to see
Keep me from the rocks
Where on tempest tossed
And hope sometimes lost
Let your light shine
In that midnight hour
When our lives are struggling
With issues deep and diverse
Holding to a fraying rope
Til the troubles past
For the wind must ease
And the rain of life must end
Cannot rain forever
Theres a rainbow somewhere near
Till the morning come
We pick up once again
As we journey on the sea.



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caroljoyce Manchester, Greater Manchester, England UK
Mon Jul 26, 2010 12:45 PM CST
Very well expressed heartfelt write. A blue colour would have helped

agoodguy2have suffolk, Virginia USA
Mon Jul 26, 2010 7:53 PM CST
liked it serpico, could feel the storm of your words. thank you. ;-)
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Posted: Feb 2011
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Comments (11)

christian22
hi carol, thank you so much for that comment, and the sea has just turned its natural colour of blue
christian22
ps the bold black just points out the name only of the colour..
christian22
hi goodguy, thanks again, well when the storm brews, i think of tea brewing, ideal time for a cuppa, appreciate your viewing and thoughts..wine
agoodguy2have
christian22, an enjoyable read the second time around as well. ;-]
SCatlyn
This is beautiful! Hopeful and relaxing... great poetry happy place
teddybear heart wings
christian22
hi dear scat, thanks so much once more for boosting my poem ..with your appreciation....of the work...thank you for such consistency..:hugs:
christian22
thanks goodguy for that second read around, appreciate that a lot..thumbs up
gnj4u
Hi, christian22,
While Holding to a fraying rope Til the troubles past, life's Lighthouses, NE favorites, beam hope into the dark and mist. Safe journey, all.
caroljoyce
Got the message second time around.angel
christian22
hi gn thank you so much again for putting your approval on this poem..its just as you say..
christian22
hi carol, well carol so glad you saw the meaning, and i appreciate your comment..
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