Unmarked and dug in Time Itself, lost graves of long ago In high-up hidden valleys where hush and lupine grow; In slowly sculpted lowlands where nameless rivers flow.
Each took a hand and played a game he thought he knew about The cave man and the native, the pioneer and scout; The miner and the cowboy who sought the country out.
While even weather tooks its toll, an ace in Nature's paw Some fell beneath the weight of years and more to fang or claw; Misfortune, perhaps, mishap or mistake- all fatal cards to draw.
Denied a graven headstone and robbed of all he planned Each long forgotten nameless one devoured by the land; Lost betting more on fickle fate than any poker hand.
Or was he maybe winning, each tombless taken dead Unbound by any fences, resting free instead; With Nature fetching flowers and mountains at his head?
Hi, ReaderOfSouls, Unmarked and dug in Time Itself, lost graves of long ago... What a powerful beginning this is that comes to a gentle and thought-provoking end with Or was he maybe winning, each tombless taken dead...With Nature fetching flowers and mountains at his head? Thank you for dealing us this hand.
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKFeb 25, 2011
I've heard stories of ranchers and farmers who've found these unmarked graves on their land and have often wondered who these people were in life. I hope that Nature gifts their resting places with flowers. :)
Great writing. Embodies the harsh reality of earlier cultures and civilizations and how fierce to exist even one more day. Very powerful and esquisitely worded. Kudos.
I like Zane Grey but Louis L'Amour (God rest his soul) was a fine writer indeed. :)I've no desire to ever write as such as he. But am perfectly happy with my poetry. :) Glad you liked this piece. :)
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This is a poignant reflective piece, and a warm remembrance of those with no name... and no record of how and when they met their fate.
Another fine write...
Bill x
Unmarked and dug in Time Itself, lost graves of long ago... What a powerful beginning this is that comes to a gentle and thought-provoking end with Or was he maybe winning, each tombless taken dead...With Nature fetching flowers and mountains at his head? Thank you for dealing us this hand.
CJ
I've heard stories of ranchers and farmers who've found these unmarked graves on their land and have often wondered who these people were in life. I hope that Nature gifts their resting places with flowers. :)
I've done my best to honor those nameless dead and hope that these few words have done so. Glad you liked it. :)
This hand is the only one I know by heart. I'm glad this piece showed up well and that you liked it. :)
A lovely write M
I like Zane Grey but Louis L'Amour (God rest his soul) was a fine writer indeed. :)I've no desire to ever write as such as he. But am perfectly happy with my poetry. :) Glad you liked this piece. :)