Hands of Time

Turning back the hands
of the clock called time
to days that lie behind
where on the memories shine


Only yesterday
sitting on the sand
together on the beach
hand holding hand


Love was like the wave
that swept across the sand
stayed for moments brief
just like the holding hand


Only yesterday
this book of life began
where all we ever did
lay captured on the page


Only yesterday
we filled the book with sand
grains of our experience
penned by our hand


With compass memories chart
the sea, our life in time
survey the golden sunset
the dawn, the waves, the wine.


Comments


agoodguy2have suffolk, Virginia USA
Sat Jul 24, 2010 2:51 PM WET
twas a grand read of a grand time. always seems too brief. ;-)

gnj4u boston, Massachusetts USA
Sat Jul 24, 2010 4:30 PM WET
Hi. Serpico12,
Grains of...experience Penned by our hand ... Lay captured on the page.... Each moment is ours and together may they shape the wave.


trurorob Alicante, Valenciana Spain
Sat Jul 24, 2010 4:37 PM WET
the grains lsip away so quickly, good write
rob


caroljoyce Manchester, Greater Manchester, England UK
Sun Jul 25, 2010 3:29 PM WET
Nice piece.

Redex Wansbeck, Northumberland, England UK
Sun Jul 25, 2010 4:22 PM WET
I liked this verse, handshake
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Posted: Feb 2011
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SCatlyn
A wonderful way with words...

"whereon the memories shine..., filled the book with sand, grains of our experience..., compass memories chart the sea..."

Just love the flow of the last 2 lines, as well
daydream
christian22
hi goodguy and thank you for that contented reply on the poem..appreciated.

hi gn, thanks and glad you liked the poem

hi rob, appreciate the comments thanks

hi carol, thank you, for noting this poem.

hi redex nice of you too to view this and like the verse..

thank you all wine
christian22
hi there scatlyn so kind as always to comment so warmly on my work..thank you so much..nice to have you drop by as you always do..wave
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