Candlelight

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Feb 2011 332 Views 10 comments

Candlelight

Author: Unknown

View the candlelight
in her eyes
a flame of love
burning bright
illuminating all
when the darkness falls
candles in the dark
love will bring us closer
showing us
the way to be one

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Posted: Feb 2011

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Comments (10)

agoodguy2have

agoodguy2havesuffolk, Virginia USAFeb 26, 2011

C22, love has often been compared to playin' with fire. ;-)

beautifulyou

beautifulyouNew York, USAFeb 26, 2011

Nice job C22..

Ty for posting

SCatlyn

SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 27, 2011

Love the comparison of love in her eyes to candlelight. Just great!

christian22

christian22OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 27, 2011

hi goodguy, yes you are right, its been described just like that...thanks again for your posting comments

christian22

christian22OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 27, 2011

hi beautifulyou, thank you too for your nice remarks on this poem, appreciated..

christian22

christian22OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 27, 2011

hi dear scat..thank you so much for your added comments too, as usual you always add a bright and pleasing thought to my work..

Redex

RedexNorthumberland, England UKFeb 27, 2011

Loved your poem (flame of love burning bright) saw that today in the picture that cher posted of him and Paloma.

christian22

christian22OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 27, 2011

hi redex thanks once more, and for what you added, appreciate your comments..

periwinkleanlace

periwinkleanlaceSouth coast of Kwazulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaFeb 27, 2011

Very beautiful once again christian.There is this gentleness about your poetry that I love

christian22

christian22OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 27, 2011

thanks periwinkle for the comments... I try to write something that is soothing...

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