When we said,'I love you..'

When we said, 'I
love you, I
thought..
What could this
mean?'
Only three weeks
together
O! what a dream..
I love her, I
think
I should know
how I feel
All day we're
together
Surely this is
real
But an old
man of 80,
asked 'How
could I
know?'
'Have you seen
her angry,
Seen her high
and low?'
Has she put
up with your
faults
When you go
into a rage?
Will she kiss
you then so
sweetly
Or rather lock
you in a cage?
Can you be
together in
quiet times
when there's
not much to say
at all,
Have you seen
her blue eyed
tears
When you never
write or call
You love her
She loves you
All you say
is Wow!
But will you
say that at
80
The way I can
say it now?'
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 2011

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QuietStormF
Lovely poem.. and only time will tell... but that is the real test isnt it? If you can learn to overlook the faults that you don't seem to be aware of the beginning stages of the relationship.. and if you can.. Wow.. then you have it made! Nice write.. enjoyed reading it.. applause hug teddybear
agoodguy2have
cafe, i pretty much agree w what quiet said "time will tell" will ya still need me, will ya still feed me, when i'm eighty...you'll be older too! ;-)
cafetwo2010
Ty quiet. I suppose all that was quite obvious. Just tried to make a poem of it.
cafetwo2010
Well, if we actually made it to eighty I guess the old gal will confess that we're 'agoodguy2have.'lol..Ty 'goodguy'thumbs up
Fellsman
Hi Cafe

The old guy is quite the savant... I enjoyed this philosophical gem.

Cheers

Bill cheers
iamwhoiamyousee
nice read..it is always a question if infatuation becomes love..
jeddah12
cafe,,will you still say those "3 words when youre that age???
if i have a man that age and he knows what really those words means,,,im gonna locked him in my arms always...i wont kick his a** when we cross the roadgrin laugh (kidding).

real love and honest and trusting love...do they really exist???
another impressive poem from a genius poetthumbs up cheers
boyshchrm6
Yes. If love is true one should overlook the minor faults and
and be accepting. To love to 80 would be a true blessing.angel thumbs up head banger
cafetwo2010
Ty quiet storm. I guess this sort of thing is easy to write about until someone really pushes our buttons. Then we find out who we are.
cafetwo2010
Ty Mr, Fellsman. I imagined this sort of coversation taking place in a park or somewhere between a young guy and of course the old man. Thanks for your appreciation.
cafetwo2010
Ty iamwho. I agree. Love can be a million things.Even infatuation with what is real. Nothing wrong with that.
cafetwo2010
Ty sunandsea. What am I going to do with you?lol. For you dear I'll try to be writing until I'm 180. I expect you to be around too. Don't run off on me.lol.
cafetwo2010
Ty Ladybee. Only you are to cool..cool
cafetwo2010
Ty jeddah queen. If I'm not to crazy and with poor memory I'll try to say those three words. What were those words again?lolteddybear
cafetwo2010
Ok sunandthesea.' I'll accept your verdict.That's an argument that holds a lot of weight!lolteddybear
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