When we said, 'I love you, I thought.. What could this mean?' Only three weeks together O! what a dream.. I love her, I think I should know how I feel All day we're together Surely this is real But an old man of 80, asked 'How could I know?' 'Have you seen her angry, Seen her high and low?' Has she put up with your faults When you go into a rage? Will she kiss you then so sweetly Or rather lock you in a cage? Can you be together in quiet times when there's not much to say at all, Have you seen her blue eyed tears When you never write or call You love her She loves you All you say is Wow! But will you say that at 80 The way I can say it now?'
Lovely poem.. and only time will tell... but that is the real test isnt it? If you can learn to overlook the faults that you don't seem to be aware of the beginning stages of the relationship.. and if you can.. Wow.. then you have it made! Nice write.. enjoyed reading it..
nice read..it is always a question if infatuation becomes love..
jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeApr 16, 2011
cafe,,will you still say those "3 words when youre that age??? if i have a man that age and he knows what really those words means,,,im gonna locked him in my arms always...i wont kick his a** when we cross the road (kidding).
real love and honest and trusting love...do they really exist??? another impressive poem from a genius poet
Yes. If love is true one should overlook the minor faults and and be accepting. To love to 80 would be a true blessing.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 16, 2011
Ty quiet storm. I guess this sort of thing is easy to write about until someone really pushes our buttons. Then we find out who we are.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 16, 2011
Ty Mr, Fellsman. I imagined this sort of coversation taking place in a park or somewhere between a young guy and of course the old man. Thanks for your appreciation.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 16, 2011
Ty iamwho. I agree. Love can be a million things.Even infatuation with what is real. Nothing wrong with that.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 16, 2011
Ty sunandsea. What am I going to do with you?lol. For you dear I'll try to be writing until I'm 180. I expect you to be around too. Don't run off on me.lol.
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 16, 2011
Ty Ladybee. Only you are to cool..
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 16, 2011
Ty jeddah queen. If I'm not to crazy and with poor memory I'll try to say those three words. What were those words again?lol
cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAApr 16, 2011
Ok sunandthesea.' I'll accept your verdict.That's an argument that holds a lot of weight!lol
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The old guy is quite the savant... I enjoyed this philosophical gem.
Cheers
Bill
if i have a man that age and he knows what really those words means,,,im gonna locked him in my arms always...i wont kick his a** when we cross the road (kidding).
real love and honest and trusting love...do they really exist???
another impressive poem from a genius poet
and be accepting. To love to 80 would be a true blessing.